|Reviews for Fragmented Time|
| Josie Belle Barnstormer chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
This author has the knack of taking a mundane series of events and making it into narrative that demands reading. At times, her penchant for inventing neologistic uses for verbs causes some discomfort, but is often illuminating for the reader.
The only real test of this chapter is this: does it leave the reader hoping for more? The answer is an unqualified yes.