Reviews for The Rhythm Of Living
Guest chapter 7 . 3/28/2012
I wish you'd update this I love your story
silversilence208 chapter 4 . 6/25/2011
I guess it's a bit late to tell you this but your character is,well, a Mary Sue. What I mean to say is Meredith is too perfect. She already knows every spell and wins everything all the time. I realize it's tempting to write a character that is flawless, but an important element of a good story is having the main character grow. Nobody is just perfect at everything from birth, everybody has strenghs and weaknesses. I do admit she faces challenges but she gets out of everything too easily. I like this story and you're way too far into it to go back and rework meredith's traits, but keep character development in mind next time you write a story. I think you are a great writer who just needs to keep developing her skills! Keep writing! Good luck!