Lol, this one was just as good as the first one XD

Absolutely loved reading what you had done, hope you come back someday but know it is not always a possibility. Loved reading both this story and it’s prequel!

I do hope that you finish this, it's getting very excitibg.

Sad to see this story unfinished.

Loved the intro...but the story literally could have been over by just instantly killing them and flying away.

Thanks for a really great (re)read so far. Would love to see more of this.
Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point, if real life permits!

It was a compelling and imaginative alternate history to read. I ama sucker for hero Tom! Great job. Thank you for sharing it.

Gotta say, with the world you have depicted I am a bit shocked Harry has not razed it to the ground, or at least assassinated the kings while he had them in his sights. But I guess contracts would have kept some of that from happening. That said, this is a terrible and sad universe you have painted.I am glad not to be part of it.

hope you might one day return. I loved what you wrote

11 years! Please please find your muse

You left it here?! Gah! I need to know what happens next!

Arghhh…please don’t stop here!

First of all, F #! me silly...

I didn't know someone could do a story so, uh, different, than the usual Harry Potter fanfiction I've been reading. True I have read some that had Dumbledore and/or Grindelwald as the dark lord, but nothing this imaginative, yet dark in places, while just as imaginative yet bright in others...

I am very much saddened that this story is unfinished and hope someone will finish it in the future. I'm definitely following this story just in case someone does...

so… it’s been years… (I think) no more?

So is there any way this thing will ever update because it’s really good