Reviews for Slip, Sliding Away
ConlonKeith chapter 12 . 6/27/2020
I like this story giving a conflict to Tealc that it is just a individual's personal earth/reality/universe/timeline/dimension is of that India's importance But you could push this story into the rest of Stargate SG1, Stargate Atlantis, and Stargate Universe if you like. But also include DC comics with the Speed force based multiverse(Flash/speedster doupleganger totems and Monitor/Antimonitors)httpsdc. fandom httpsen.m. wikipedia httpsdc. fandom httpsen.m. wikipedia httpsdc. fandom httpsen.m. wikipedia and and Marvel comics with the Web of Life/destiny based(Spiderman doppleganger basede totems and Madame Web and beyonders) httpsmarvel. fandom httpsmarvel. fandom httpswww. marvel httpsen.m. wikipedia httpsmarvel. fandom httpsmarvel. fandom httpsen.m. wikipedia httpsmarvel. fandom So personally I think that the Stargate program should acquire allies from the other earths/ realities/universes/timelines in order to be able to handle the villainous multilateral level race of sliders, Marvel comics, and DC comics.
JOHN0713 chapter 12 . 11/9/2018
Really getting into the story but I see that it’s been a few years since you wrote it. Maybe you will finish it someday.
JannaKalderash chapter 3 . 6/29/2018
I have a quibble.
Jack is talking about stealing someone else's property, just to keep them at the base, when he has NO RIGHT TO DO SO.
carlos chapter 6 . 6/9/2018
wow increible! que bueno que el doctor no se detuviera la busqueda de una cura! fantastico fic!
mikoto.misaka chapter 12 . 1/28/2015
its been 2yrs since the last updates i want more of this fic.
trekkifulron chapter 12 . 7/4/2014
good so far but will it continue?
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
I just want to say July 17 is my birthday. Now for the FanFiction. It's ok. I find you give quite a bit of detail of what's going on which helps. I feel a bit more detail wouldn't hurt. I feel like you skip bits that would be intresting to read. I feel the doo lounge could use some work because it feels like it dosent flow well from the characters mouths. It feels like its a bit out of character. Although, like I said, it's ok. I look forward to reading more.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
I just want to mention first that July 17th is my birthday. Now about your fanfiction. It's ok. You do a good job of giving detail of what's going on so I can see it in my head. I think your biggest weakness is dialogue. I feel that wen you write something for the characters to say it doesn't seem quite right. It feels a little out of character.
USANAguy chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
Oh, this is cool! The Kromaggs vs. The Goa'uld! Nothing like swaping insults between a Kromagg subcommander and a Jaffa First Prime!
USANAguy chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
This story is brilliant! I love it!
Nightgazer333 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Mrsrobertp6165 : I'm sorry to hear that.

It must be rough for you now.

My father died on June 1, 2013.

So I know Somewhat how you feel.

I wish you well in life now.
Robert chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Never saw Rembrandt cuss
highlander348 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Story sucks.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5/2013
I do think there is a simple yet cliche solution. The Asgard should have technology that would allow them to check the quantum signature of a person, assuming they were aware of the quantum device and/or parallel universes and travel.
Swack16 chapter 12 . 2/27/2013
This is a good fic I wish you would continue
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