Reviews for Mahou Senki: Lyrical Days
Darkjaden chapter 5 . 10/7
The jewel seed might be pushing Shiro into the realm of True Magic like Denial of Nothingness.
Mernom chapter 8 . 9/17
Mernom casts revive!... Did it fail?
Zekrob chapter 5 . 4/7
Gurren lagann feels: Believe in me who believes in you!
LEE chapter 8 . 3/17
uditkotnis chapter 8 . 3/11
Great fic, looking forward to shiro vs signum.
Theburper chapter 8 . 2/13
Will you ever post the second arc?
PyruxDeltax chapter 8 . 1/17
Whens the next Arc going to be up/posted?
DanteNaru chapter 8 . 9/12/2015
ARSLOTHES chapter 8 . 8/8/2015
looking forward to when you decide to update this fic again
Rakaan chapter 8 . 6/19/2015
Makes me sad that the next arc isn't happening, given it's been years since this one ended.
polarpwnage chapter 5 . 6/3/2015
Projecting normal blade for Shirou only costs like 10 units of prana compared so any other non bladed items which are like 5x more. Not to mention he's tracing mundane blade and not noble phantasms, so he should be able to make at least couple dozen taking into account how new he is using his circuits
polarpwnage chapter 2 . 6/3/2015
I don't know where this is going, if Shirou never participates in the Grail war, then he has no arsenal for his UBW, without that he's useless unless u do a deus ex machina and give him an overpowered device which basically invalidates Emiya Shirou. You should've just had post war Shirou in this fic
Jay06 chapter 8 . 5/10/2015
Awesome story I loved the way you wrote the shirou his evolution really hope you write the second arc
all forms of fluff chapter 8 . 2/5/2015
I got to say this is an interesting cross over. I am not sure you can actually sustain it into the grail war as advertised as Kitsuragi would need to be alive to explain the Master seals if they appear. I am a bit disapointed that you have given Shirou all the weapons in Unlimited Blade works, even if he can't Trace them yet. I also felt it was a bit of a cheep tatic to make Tracing part of the the Seed, inless thats just a smoke screen and it was a natural development and everyone just played it off as coming from an outside source. I am kinda also thrown by his Golem sword wielding. I get that he could trace the gient weapons, its the actually using them as weapons and not launching them like he did against chrono. I guess its a mental image thing that just didn't fly with me but it wasn't a bad scean. All in all I have enjoyed the story so far and I am looking forward to War of the Knight Sky. If it is as well put together as the Seed Hunt then I am sure it will be well recived. So untill next time, Thank you for the story and I hope you contine having as much fun writing as I have had reading.
Nine chapter 8 . 11/26/2014
Two years later and not a hint to be seen...
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