Reviews for Yume No Kage
Wolfsbane706 chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Before I go any further, this isn't a flame. This story ha sobvious potential, but there are MAJOR screw-ups in it already. For one, your character names are COMPLETELY wrong. It's not "Play", it's "Engi". "Engi Threepiece". Second off, you screwed up on Pharos' name as well. "Pharos Heracles" or "Pharos Hercules". Either one works, but not "Phalos Elcres". That's just wrong. I'm not sure where you got your translated names, but you need a new source. Deperately. More to come if I find more mistakes.