Reviews for Alice's little nudger
trinket107 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
write more I luv!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
People r prego 4 9 months not 6
Gryffindor 20 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
luv this story so far please update soon thanx -D
The Phantom Of The Labyrinth chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I agree with Reena Catheryn, But I don't mean to be a flamer... On the other hand, I wrote a story were Alice gets pregnant, but because SM made it clear Vampires can't have children (Forgetting Edward) It makes it kinda hard to write a story write like that. And I think it's not that bad, except the timeline is all over the place, but besides that, it's good for a first try. Keep Writing!
Reena Catheryn chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I hate to be a flamer, but if you're timeline is all over the place and your plot is unrealistic. Your characters are extremely OOC. If you were going to do an Alice baby story, it has to be AH or at least she has to be human. If not, it's simply impossible. Sorry, but good luck on your writing!