Reviews for The Substitute
Catalina H chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Good job! I never thought there was enough information in the books about how Lily and Sirius's relationship was. I think you did a wonderful job showing that with this story.
secretsmiling chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
I love the idea of this and Sirius is perfectly written :-)
xBlownxAwayx chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
So gorgeous. I love it! I love the idea that Sirius and Lily eventually became just as close as James and Lily and James and Sirius. I love the idea that Sirius and Lily both consider each other family. Amazing fic!
Kikii chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
This was a gem. Loved it, well done!
zekksgirl chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
so this was amazing and i think that you should totally do a story with Lilly and each of the Marauders. I also read The Dinner and it was amazing as well. I love how Vernon reacted when James stood up to his full height and crossed his arms. Priceless :)
soweroftales chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
This is really wounderful. REALLY. Its sweet and funny and heartbreaking. Your writing is really balanced, not every line is a joke, but the ones that are great and original, and the angst at the end isn't out of place, because there's little bits sprinkled all the way through. I LOVED IT. The ending made me want to scream "They can't die! They just can't!"
gibrelina chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This is great! I love Sirius/Lily friendship and now I'm depressed because you don't have other stories...

But thanks for sharing this one. (;
Liz chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I love this relationship so much! You did such an incredible job with them! I live Lily's words to Sirius at the end!
RodentFace chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I've asked Prongs twelve or so times whether or not he wants to back out…

Love Sirius's "muggle-way" of doing things. Great story. I loved it.
Annabelle chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
This is a very good story.

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

www . sapientimagic . com (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Annabelle Morrow, SUM student
Hulio chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Really great story, I've always loved the Sirius/Lily friendship and now after reading this I find that my love for them has grown. :)

Keep up the great work.