|Reviews for Vacation Trip|
| hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I love it!
Please update soon!
| hazydckRC chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
i really like this, its freakin awesome you need to turn this in to funimation or something. this is great, i would publish this myself if i could. you should make more it was really cute!
i really enjoyed it.
| Kitsune-Blue chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
A little hard to read with no spacing, i'd recommend spacing it out and reposting, but from what I managed to grasp it was cute )
| Mimsley chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Just a tip...
The writing itself isn't bad. However, the formatting makes it very difficult to read. Remember: every time a character speaks or a new paragraph/idea is introduced, hit enter to make it a separate line. ;)