Reviews for Vacation Trip
hawkeyeflame1921 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Amazing!

I love it!

Please update soon!
hazydckRC chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
i really like this, its freakin awesome you need to turn this in to funimation or something. this is great, i would publish this myself if i could. you should make more it was really cute!

i really enjoyed it.
Kitsune-Blue chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
A little hard to read with no spacing, i'd recommend spacing it out and reposting, but from what I managed to grasp it was cute )
Mimsley chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
Just a tip...

The writing itself isn't bad. However, the formatting makes it very difficult to read. Remember: every time a character speaks or a new paragraph/idea is introduced, hit enter to make it a separate line. ;)