Reviews for What I've been missing
LolaLaTrailera chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
That was hot! D:

I really like the end, Deidara being in love with him and stuff
revolutionwithoutriot chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
"(A/N In other words, it would have to go poopieess or weewee! :3)" "(A/N a couple being about eight in this case xD)"

Unnecessary, and they completely deduct from the overall tone of the story.

OTHER THAN THAT. It was well written, and the light fluff at the end fit well.
MagdalenaCS chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I really love this fic!

I need read more of your fic deisaso please writting more :D

I love sasori in this fic, is so cute n,n

sorry I don't speak english, I read this with google traslator

sorry for my bad english
ChiyumeAndKyoko chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
luv it, Luv It , luv it, Luuuuv it, LUV IT! Really good job!
purpleoverpink chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
aw i think they r my fav gay couple XD
Stelera Kinsman chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
This was a very impressive oneshot. You did a very good job of breaking the literary mold with your writing style - you kept from being too simple or too vague, you weren't afraid to add a little detail, and I think that's wonderful. You kept an audience in mind and mixed humor in with the good stuff, but you also knew where to leave the humor out.

However (there's always a big but) I feel like you limit yourself by writing oneshots, though my perverse, tired mind thinks you, I feel like with language like you have, you've got the makings of a good fiction writer, even if it is just fan fiction. Keep up the good work ;D