Reviews for I'm Here
Demon Vampire180 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
This was very sweet. It kind of made me want to cry to cry a little. Very nice job. :)
mirai3k chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
ohh this is so achey but i love the premise. i can completely understand memphisto's unease by all that shiro has just taken on and i'm forever intrigued by memphisto shiro's relationship. hope you write more of them!
dinocavallones chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
can i just say that this fanfic made me BAWWW so hard.

i had to - ohmygod. lol. yeah, you're gonna have to deal with a spazzy review. it was just .. so sad. ; I MEAN, SO TOUCHING, TOO. my favourite part was:

"How? How can you smile about this?" The moon was revealed once more, casting light onto the other's aging features. Shiro pushed up his rimmed glasses, the beads glinting in the light.

With a small pause, he responded, "I've been blessed with two sons. Who wouldn't smile?"

that part. so much. my heart just melted everywhere and now i'm a complete mess. also, the end was aksdjhaskdja-worthy.

"Yes, but who will protect you?"

ugh. just. this. so. much. words cannot express how much i love this fic. i was actually intending to write you one of my long, special reviews. the ones i give to really good fics/authors, but it's so late at night that my brain has been turned to mush. and this fic didn't help either - not that it's a bad thing. i'm actually quite glad your fic made me melt.


anyway. ... love this fic. love you for writing it. just.. ugh. my heart. it died. ILU. I NEED THIS FIC. /prints it out to read in bed.)
UndineAlice chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Wonderful! I love your formal writing style in this story, and your characterization was great. I would love to see more Shiro/Mephisto fics from you.

ephemeral PLEASURES chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Thank you so much, Christina! I always enjoy any type of feedback. You've calmed many of my worries that I wasn't playing the characters accurately. xD
Cristina.N chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Hello! I just read your story, and although I'm not that good at writing critique, I wanted to encourage you and tell you that your story is really, really well written; I like that fact that you use certain terms and syntax construction that give the writing a more formal style " could take no more" instead of " couldn't take it any more" for ex.

Also, you nailed down the characters' personalities ! Keep up the good work!