|Reviews for Following Alex|
| MLM24 chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
Love it! Please continue!
| Synchro lover chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
| grimmich chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
hehehe, nice offhand comment! 'Tom knows.'
| serenityselena chapter 5 . 6/15/2011
interesting way of finding the truth about your friends life _
| AresScarletRaven chapter 5 . 6/14/2011
I'd suggest maybe getting a beta? You forget a lot of your grammar and should reword some things.
Alex picked up his wallet taking out an identity card he threw it to James.
Alex picked up his wallet, taking out an identity card, he threw it to James.
But even then it sounds like he throws the wallet without the identity card.
Alex picked up his wallet, taking out an identity card and throwing it to James.
I also think you should fix your dialogue, you say who said what after everything. In the confrontation it's not really needed, you can tell who said what.
| biblioholic chapter 5 . 6/14/2011
Interesting fic concerning Alex's other school friends. Live the one line at the end "Tom knows".
A follow up one-shot? Please?
| DammitimmaD chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
I'm LOVING the quick updates!
| ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
hahaha this could take some explaining
| DammitimmaD chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
:D DUN DUN DUNNN! Please update soon! And make the chapters longer! PLEASE!