Reviews for Following Alex
Ava Simbelmyne chapter 5 . 3/30/2017
that was good! It really made Alex look bad for a first impression! XD I was like 'oh great, of all things they could see him doing...' XD I liked it though, and the revealing wasn't overdrawn (drawn-out) which was nice. It was short and to the point.
:) Keep it up!
Ava S
(yes I have an I'm not signed in, no I'm not lazy, just busy and forgot to XD )
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
The lord read this fic, and saw that it was good. He said to his disciples let thine eyes partake of this great beauty. And it was so.

That's how good this is, hope you know that.
MLM24 chapter 5 . 11/6/2013
Love it! Please continue!
Synchro lover chapter 5 . 9/26/2011
grimmich chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
hehehe, nice offhand comment! 'Tom knows.'
serenityselena chapter 5 . 6/15/2011
interesting way of finding the truth about your friends life _
AresScarletRaven chapter 5 . 6/14/2011
I'd suggest maybe getting a beta? You forget a lot of your grammar and should reword some things.

Alex picked up his wallet taking out an identity card he threw it to James.


Alex picked up his wallet, taking out an identity card, he threw it to James.

But even then it sounds like he throws the wallet without the identity card.

Alex picked up his wallet, taking out an identity card and throwing it to James.

I also think you should fix your dialogue, you say who said what after everything. In the confrontation it's not really needed, you can tell who said what.
biblioholic chapter 5 . 6/14/2011
Interesting fic concerning Alex's other school friends. Live the one line at the end "Tom knows".

A follow up one-shot? Please?

Rate 8.2/10
DammitimmaD chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
I'm LOVING the quick updates!
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
hahaha this could take some explaining

DammitimmaD chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
:D DUN DUN DUNNN! Please update soon! And make the chapters longer! PLEASE!