Reviews for Room 415
Mindlessgal chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
I think your idea is amazing please write it
InuKag4evertogether chapter 13 . 7/10/2012
uggggg, no, u can't leave it there! i want, no need to know wut happened and who this person with kags is!
Isa710 chapter 13 . 6/22/2012
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!
beccaosa chapter 13 . 6/20/2012
Oh my god, I remember this. I'm glad, both that you got the inspiration to write and that you have an interesting love life now.. It happens to the best of us xD Anyway, it's been so long! Thank you for the update.
Agent Valkyrie chapter 12 . 6/16/2012
I liked the story. Found it interesting and can't wait to see what happens next. Please update again
petpeeves12 chapter 12 . 10/23/2011
it seems kikyo can't see the nose in front of her face. lol
Kitty'sCommittee chapter 12 . 10/23/2011
UPDATE!
beccaosa chapter 12 . 10/13/2011
I really like your story, and have liked it for a few months now. However, sometimes it feels a little unnatural when I read it, and I can't get the full feeling from it. Mainly because your writing says "have not" and "it is/has", instead of "haven't" and "it's". But it's your story, and you do it however you want, I'm just saying that it feels a little awkward sometimes xD
petpeeves12 chapter 11 . 10/6/2011
I have a suggestion... can u put the bulk of ur author's note and review replies at the end of the chapter. I make this suggestion because I find it annoying to try and scroll through a quarter to half a chapter just to get to the story part. Especially when Im trying to read it on something small like my phone. More detail on how inu planned his date with kags and how miroku was a distraction would have been nice
petpeeves12 chapter 10 . 10/6/2011
ehhh... u need to slow down the pace a little bit. The chapters are a little rushed and without much detail.
petpeeves12 chapter 9 . 10/6/2011
Kags must be pmsing shes constantly yelling and going from one emotion to the next quickly. enter Shippo on to the scene
petpeeves12 chapter 8 . 10/6/2011
meeting mom fun
petpeeves12 chapter 7 . 10/6/2011
a short informative nap with a love confession after a week of getting to know each other. lol
petpeeves12 chapter 6 . 10/6/2011
I think adding the song to the end was just random propaganda for your favorite song. its a nice song though
beccaosa chapter 11 . 9/11/2011
Pfffttt fluff 33 It's amazing. I love how Inu was speaking in this chapter. I dunno, something about the way it sounded in my mind, I guess. Sorry 'bout your ankle, I feel your pain, bro.
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