|Reviews for Consequences HIMYM|
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/11
| Nat chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Addressing the reviews before me, the author has a archive of our own account where she/he has uploaded many more chapters to this story, under the same pen name "dreamofspike". The link is in her bio page. Now for the story itself, it is beautifully written and I love how you portrayed this two characters entering a relationship in a much darker tone than other Ted/Barney fics out there. Hope you write more fics featuring them together!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/21/2013
This story is absolutely amazing, I'm so glad I found it. I love how you've shown Ted playing on Barney's insecurities and his need for approval. And although canon ted is way too nice to do something like this the way you've portrayed him in this story is incredible. Showing his desperation and his conflict and his anger all mixing together to form this sadistic side of him. I also love the progression of this story, how the manipulation and control was built up and how their relationship shifted gradually and now lily is involved as well, it could make things really interesting with her being suspicious of the situation. I wonder what the others will do if they find out what Ted has been doing?
I love this story so much and i almost cried when i realised how long it had been since you updated and after such a cliffhanger. Seriously if you post a new chapter I'll give you my first born child. I'm begging
This is too amazing to go unfinished.
| Desperate reader chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
NO,No,no! I can't accept that has been more than 1YEAR since you last updated this story! Its so unfair and sad for us! You write this amazing story, develop it until chapter 14 and when it gets to the climax... You just stopped! And its not even because you're not wrating fanfics anymore, because you still update your other fanfics! So i ask you, no, i beg you, in the name of all the people who read and reviewed and fell in love for this story, FINISH THIS! I know you would make many readers happy (especilly this year, because its the final year of HIMYM) and also would make both ted and barney happy if you finally solve their wonderful love-sex-friendship relation! So, think kindly and with lots of love in your heart while reading this humble review!
| freakycat98 chapter 14 . 6/27/2013
Ok, at first I gotta say I was scared to read this but after I started to get really into it! I even got my friend (who doesn't normally read fanfiction) to begin reading it, she loves it. I'm speaking for both of us when I say we really want you to finish it :) I hope you do we're both woundering what's going to happen in the 15th chapter :) please finnish you're a great writer.
| huyandhieu chapter 14 . 3/24/2013
This story is simply breathtaking. I couldn't stop reading this story. The way you developed Ted's sadistic character and Barney's longing, broken character keeps me so wrapped up, I nearly burst into years everytime Barney lets himself believe Ted could change. I love that Lily is the caretaker, especially since she's now a mother. Please do update soon. I know it's almost been a year since your last update, but I'm just dying to know what happens next!
| Shrink chapter 14 . 12/17/2012
Pleeeeease finish this story. Cannot believe you've left us in suspense like this lol. I love how crazy Ted is and so sorry for Barney though I love that he is submitting!
| chau chapter 14 . 11/24/2012
this is amazing
i feel so sad for barney!
you need to update this! its just so good to read !
| Mudbud333 chapter 14 . 11/16/2012
... Well, this was quite the golden nugget I've found. Keep it up!
| XxDreamScapexX chapter 14 . 9/30/2012
this story is awesome cannot wait to read more! Ted is so evil i love it!
| Umbrae Calamitas chapter 14 . 9/27/2012
Right. I'd like to kick Ted in the bare crotch right now.
I like this story... kind of. I'm pretty fond of it, but I'm also a little worried that I'm going to start hating how it's going if it doesn't change. I mean, Ted's not acting very Ted-ish, and he's basically raping Barney. And it's pretty obvious in the series alone that Barney has some serious self-esteem issues, and how can Ted not know that? For all of his talk about Barney destroying their friendship, I don't see how any of their friends would want to be friends with Ted the way he's acting.
I'm kind of hoping one of the others catches Ted in the act, or something happens that snaps Ted back into reality, before he really does end up killing Barney. I'm kind of sad about there be so much angst and not much hurt/comfort. I don't want Ted to lose Barney as a friend, but... it's sadly looking like that may be the end result.
So, I am hoping you update soon, but I also hope things take a better turn, soon. I'm not sure I can take much more of Ted calling Barney a whore and not noticing how much it hurts him.
Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
| Textcrazy chapter 14 . 9/8/2012
Oh god, poor barney! I love this story so far, love how you have managed to get into both their mind sets without it seeming like it's running on or repetitive. What I can get though is when ted wrapped the belt around his throat, strangely good idea by the way, why it wouldn't shock barney into running? I understand that he is sucked in, but I hope you let barney have some control again since he is worth it! Plus how is ted going to feel when he finds out how much barney feels for him? I hope you protect out sexy blonde!
Love it, update!
| Sapphyah30 chapter 14 . 8/31/2012
Oh my god i cant wait for you to update this story. It is so amazing and I'm really enjoying reading it.
| AntarcticaLovesPenguins chapter 14 . 8/5/2012
Is it sick that i love this story? Thank you for writing it!
| ALovelyLie chapter 14 . 7/12/2012
Wow. It really is disturbing seeing Ted this manipulative and bat shit crazy, but I can't stop reading. Pleas update soon!