Reviews for Sarah's Mistake
you rock chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
*Audible Gasp!* OH NO! Jareth is just a /little/ too good at finding loop-holes D-8.

Anyway, I really like this so far :-).
GlitteringAngel chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
I look forward to seeing how this pans out. I think we all have days when we could just wish people away (I work in retail and customers and their screaming kids can be a right pain in the backside sometimes!).

Quick suggestion, you might want to give chapters a quick read over before posting, I spotted the odd mistake here and there, but overall I like it.
Serena24 chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
Pretty good start. I wonder what she'll have to endure in order to remedy this situation. She obviously won't have to run the labyrinth again, or Jareth would have already told her to as soon as she made the "wish", but what could she possibly offer in exchange of all of her students ? It surely can't be onle life for another, and I hope it won't be a lifetime of torture.

By the way, you forgot to mention what category it will be : romance ? Angst ? Drama ? Adventure ?... I'd really like to know.

Continue, and hopefully see you soon.
Kaytori chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
interesting looking forward to finding out what happens next
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