Reviews for Sarah's Mistake
LuluCalliope chapter 11 . 4/15/2012
Jareth is not a trickster! He is a magician, there is a difference!

Although he doesn't play fair. I remember how he took several hours off of Sarah's time limit in the movie! (Although, for a while, I wondered if he was punishing Sarah for being smart with him, or if he was just too eager to see her...)

(Oh, and Happy 200th Review!)

LuluCalliope chapter 10 . 4/15/2012
Jareth and Jocelyn...Jocelyn and Jareth...Jareth and Sarah...Sarah and Jareth...

(I think that I like the ones with Sarah better than the one with Jocelyn. But I think it is nice to see a character that does have some redeeming qualities, even if she does pose a threat to Sarah in certain ways.)

Great work!
LuluCalliope chapter 47 . 4/14/2012

LuluCalliope chapter 18 . 4/14/2012
Ha, ha, ha! I could see through your tricks all along! I KNEW he was married!

(...No, I didn't...)

What a twist!
LuluCalliope chapter 13 . 4/14/2012
OH! You pulled the oldest trick in the book on me! "I love a brother!"

Oh, I'm angry! I should have seen it coming!
LuluCalliope chapter 9 . 4/14/2012
The flowers only say to me that Jareth does feel regret for the way he has been treating Sarah...however, I cannot help but suspect that this Jocelyn is going to be...a rival later.

Great chapter!
LuluCalliope chapter 8 . 4/14/2012
What does he have in store for Sarah?

Oh, this is getting a little intense. This is going onto my favorite stories list!
LuluCalliope chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
I looked up the meaning of the purple hyacinths...and now I think that I can look upon Jareth with more sympathy...something which Sarah is, I believe, not capable of doing at the present...

Great work!
LuluCalliope chapter 4 . 4/14/2012
I am contemplating NOT looking up the meaning of the flowers, only because it might mean something sweet, and it might make the romance between Sarah and Jareth much sweeter later on...

Oh, what have I got to lose? I want for them to end up together anyway...
LuluCalliope chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
I think that Sarah is taking this much better than she has in other stories on the site...and that's saying something, considering how this chapter ended with her crying to herself.

Why do I get the feeling that things are only going to go downhill from here? Poor Sarah...
LuluCalliope chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
Ah, here we go! Nice, detailed chapters!

Yes, I do recall that Sarah became a teacher...
LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Whoa, forty-seven chapters? Impressive! But...there's less than five hundred reviews?

(I hope that this isn't because all of the chapters are dreadfully short, like this one. I expect my stories to have lengthier chapters following the first one. I'll try to be nice and not too demanding with what I expect. However, I do expect great things to come from this!)
Kou Shun'u chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
there is an anime sequel? really? what year and what is it called and by whom?

"Some days I wish I could just wish all my students away to the Goblin King," but that isnt a wish. seeing as how picky the goblins were about the wording in the first one, i would think these words would not work.
Angelwells chapter 47 . 4/14/2012
Awesome ending! Congrats on completetng your story and thank you for sharing it with us

Angel :)
Labyrinth Addict chapter 47 . 4/13/2012
I really loved this story.
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