Reviews for Legend of the Seraph: Part 1
I'llfightyouforpudding1107 chapter 4 . 7/6
Maya the horse? how much do you want to bet that you don't like Maya?
Halo odst chapter 2 . 5/4
That was utterly stupid to milk that cow
Deidaran-Chan chapter 8 . 2/22/2012 this is the best fan fic i have EVER READD!
NerdyMusician513 chapter 13 . 9/5/2011
I love it. Amazing. There's a few wrong spellings and a few messed up sentences but other than that, should totally write more. Update or make a sequel. PLEASE! :D
ObsessiveReader1223 chapter 13 . 8/21/2011
I'm guessing you're a Terry Goodkind fan. If you're not the world is an extremely weird, freaky, coincidental place and I'm majorly surprised. :)

This was really good! It's a LOT like Wizards First Rule (I would say it's a crossover if I didn't know they weren't allowed on the site), but with your own twist to it, and definitely very Maximum Ride-ish! :D I LOVE Fang and Max! Actually, this story seems like a mix between, MR, Wizards First Rule, and Eragon(in a good way). Jeb makes a good Brom/Zedd!

Thanks for writing! I look forward to reading your stuff in the future! :D
Aiyna-chan chapter 13 . 8/20/2011
Great chapter, and update soon!
Sierra156 chapter 13 . 8/16/2011
Awww! Daddy's Little Girl :D So adorable! Makes me think of my cousin and his daughter. Although he's more like Fang than Iggy...


YAY FAX! That was so sweet of Fang :D And I love Shena. Did it ell you that? i just love her :D
Angie Jeanne chapter 13 . 8/15/2011
I love it!
angelborn inhelll chapter 13 . 8/15/2011
I thought you put this chapter up
Sierra156 chapter 12 . 8/15/2011
Whooooaaaaa. Slightly creepy. but great chapter! I loved it :D Such adorable Faxness! Adn ARI'S DEAD :D Well... for now. Lol.
Aiyna-chan chapter 12 . 8/15/2011
Well, good job!
Angie Jeanne chapter 12 . 8/14/2011
:O! AMAZING! Keep writing!
The Jade Empress chapter 12 . 8/14/2011
update soon
maximumridechick chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
wow this is really good, its kinda cheesy which makes it funny but overall is has a good plot and story line :)

btw you probably wondering why i'm adding this to story alerts, its just so i dont forget to read the rest of it :D
Jace'n'FangLover chapter 12 . 8/14/2011
DUDE! you skippped a part! no mention of the fight! or the scene when the book suddenly burning! wat is this! im soo confused!
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