Reviews for During the Off Season
Guest chapter 5 . 5/11
Edward 's head was interesting

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQuez
Atwiggs chapter 5 . 4/12
Oh I truly loved this outtake! I love hearing Edward’s mind! He has to figure things out. Screw the money, stay there with Bella or maybe Charlie could sell the business and then they could move to Seattle with the siblings. Emmett would be there to! But I have a feeling they will stay on the river...
Atwiggs chapter 3 . 4/11
Omg! Poor Edward!
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 4/10
Finally we get to see in Edwards brain! I e been so frustrated not being able to read his mind Lol! He lov
Guest chapter 5 . 6/7/2017
Great job! I liked getting to see Edward's side of the story.
Mtg526 chapter 5 . 1/6/2017
Love everything about this story. Thanks so much for sharing EPOVs. I hope you find yourself writing more for this story. I just can't get enough.
Tongue-Twied chapter 5 . 8/16/2016
I was so not ready to leave the marina yet or this Edward and Bella, so I was overjoyed when I found these EPOV chapters!

I really want to give you a hard time about Jacob being Bella's first. I mean...I thought we were all Team Edward here. grrrrr... LOL!

Thank you for all the passion and work you put into this amazing story and these characters! This was my fantastic read...for the summer...of 2016! :)
wordhoarder24 chapter 5 . 3/29/2016
FTS, and this, is something I must have read a hundred times. The words are so beautiful. It's like I've been there, with them, all those years because the story you tell is so vivid. The characters are so realistic and flawed and all the more perfect for it. You've done such a great job with Carlisle and Jacob especially. I don't even know what to say. Just, thank you. Thank you so much.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/18/2015
I quit reading this! Bella is a bitch in the worse way! Everything has to go her way and she don't see the forest for the trees.. I know Edward has his thing going on but come on in every story I've read she is eather a baby or poor me me. I like the stories don't get me wrong but man Bella needs to get her act together..
debslmac chapter 5 . 1/22/2015
:) loved these
Reader-many chapter 5 . 8/22/2014
His pov was beautiful
Reader-many chapter 4 . 8/22/2014
Wow He was treatened by Charlie...
Reader-many chapter 3 . 8/22/2014
This chapter marks everything and alse I can see Carlose is not an Ass
Reader-many chapter 2 . 8/21/2014
I love how slways she was his priority
Reader-many chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Reading this I kind of like Angela, of courso not for Edward, lol
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