Reviews for Death of a Padawan
niiary chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Actually this is pretty good! :D I really like your style of writing, and from Vader's perspective is very interesting!

I think there are some grammar mistakes with some commas that are missing, but no more.

wAcKaMoLe911 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Great story! I am a huge Ahsoka fan and am actually quite obsessed with how she will die in the end. I particularly liked how there was no compassion from Vader when he killed her. A lot of stories have made him regretful and sad about his decision to kill her-I love how your Vader was completely lost to the Dark Side in this one shot. Good job!
ThisIsTrueImmortality chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Oh, man. That was so sad. Apprentices dying at the hands of their masters, or vice versa, is probably the biggest betrayal in the Star Wars universe.

As to your writing, though, it was great! You just keep getting better! :)
ChaosCassy chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Hey, braceface!

HILARIOUS! Oh, men... So sad, the poor Ashoka *sniff*

Anakin you are a *peeep* *grr*

A very fantastic OS!

Greets, ChaosCassy