Reviews for The Eye of the Storm
LetMeSign9 chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
I can't find the original story. help me out please
BellaTesoro chapter 5 . 9/20/2018
The Harry Potter thing made me laugh out loud and Edward just wanting his BJ and knowing he'd get it either way but said he'd watch it and she didn't 'have to do it'...funny stuff.
And I'm glad Edward didn't go off and just 'off' Aro until he heard the details.
BellaTesoro chapter 4 . 9/20/2018
I can't say I really liked younger version of Edward. He was such a gangsta like punk and man how they abused girls...I know, I know, this is their world. So cool to see Carlisle though. I get him so much better having read these outtake chapters. Edward, I'm so glad he matured and grew up and found some basic emotional feelings toward woman or at least toward his BeBella.
BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 9/19/2018
I am so glad to have had this Carlisle point of view. Wow! I really have always felt badly for Carlisle. Even with the limited insight into his point of view from the major story, the reader understood he just was not like the other made men and he had his issues, using sex and drugs etc to check out of this life he doesn't quite feel connected to on one hand and yet too involved not to. He says here he loves his brother and I think he did/does but then he continues with Gail/ Jen once he finds out she was an FBI agent and even went so far as to bug Edward's do you continue to trust her at this point? Carlisle really has some crazy issues to deal with if he's even thinking about running away from this life, Esme, his child and of course Edward...I'm clearer now why Carlisle takes what he does from Edward and Esme etc...So at this point in the story Edward doesn't even know the worst of what Carlisle now knows, that Gail was an FBI agent and could have brought them all down, that to me is worse than Carlisle simply having sex with yet another woman and getting her pregnant. Poor Esme and poor Carlisle. I see now why Carlisle just took the beating and near death that Edward brought down upon him. Carlisle seems willing to die and not care about anything at this point. I'm thinking he's pretty depressed and I'm sure has more mental health issues. I feel for him, I do. I hope Edward doesn't kill Carlisle after finding out that he knew, after the fact, yet he knows about Jen...Wow, that's big. Why didn't Carlisle fight not to be brought into that life more, Edward seemed to let it go, knowing he just didn't have what it takes, I'm with Carlisle on this one, Edward should have protected him from all this...
BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 9/19/2018
It was great to get more information about how and why Aro killed Alec. We didn't have any information about it, I thought he just found a way to off him and so did and then took whatever Edward wanted to give him as punishment for not listening to him. If Edward knew Aro's version of events he had to appreciate that Aro had no choice but to kill him.
I really like getting these extra outtakes, the only thing I don't like is, well, Aro has a few of the same character traits as Edward has, and he's the same kind of lover and his budding romance with Lauren is somewhat similar to E/B in regards to the reader's sympathizing with these characters and enjoying how hot these assholes are, lol. Anyway, I just want Edward to be this hot, hot headed, loyal to his love and protective of those he cares about. I really liked seeing Aro and his neighbor friends that he protects. My father came here from Calabria and I am a first generation Italian so a lot of the cultural stuff, (minus the mob things, lol) I can relate to. Loved Nonna sweeping the hallways and her in black and Aro having the granddaughter be respectful of her...and then going after the punk who beat her...yeah he's a little like Edward.
BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 9/19/2018
So...I'm reading Quiet Storm (on pdf) for the very first time, yay me...and since I can't comment from a pdf and I so wanted to read more backstory about Aro, here I am...I'm loving Quiet Storm as much as everyone as told me I would (I can't believe I've waited this long to actually read it...) I just wanted you to know you've got new readers who appreciate your stories. Ok, off to read these five chapters of outtakes and then back to finish Quiet Storm. I'll read the other two parts on fan fiction and drop you more reviews along the way.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/4/2016
Loved em all xxx
Guest chapter 5 . 10/29/2014
Wonder if he spots himself in harry potter x
Guest chapter 4 . 10/29/2014
Edward created a monster! Xxx
Guest chapter 3 . 10/29/2014
I feel bad for Carlisle and his fucked up life even if most of it is his own fault. Love u x
soton chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
These out-takes of Aro really helps to combat my mistrust of him... also really helps me get over the creepy mental picture I have of Aro, lol!

I can't remember if in QS Aro explained to Edward that Alec came looking for him and not the other way round!

Seriously loving the QS series - you are a brilliant writer and should be published.
malleelee chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Lexi - You write like you were there. Superlatives for this all around.
Taylor chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
What happened to Quiet Storm?
Becky03 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
What happened to quiet storm
rubell chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
i came over to read something completely different? in the middle of a chapter...not sur i like 'lau' so much right now...
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