Reviews for Phantom Mystery
Candy Phantom chapter 9 . 5/6
I ate an entire box of Mike and Ikes.
Silver: and a bag of Rolos.
It was awesome.
Candy Phantom chapter 13 . 4/18
SHINY!
dannyphantomphan21 chapter 17 . 3/28
i really like this story. but not a fan of the ending but it is AWESOME
emanon chapter 7 . 7/22/2014
So. Not gonna lie. I like the combo. There are some food lines so far and the idea is interesting... However, there are some issues so far that are bugging me. Danny's a bit out of character and I feel like some of the interactions are rushed. They don't flow naturally. I like what you are trying to do... Gonna keep reading, I want to see how this resolves.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/4/2014
Danny and Shawn are really REALLY REALLY OOC. I mean seriously? Danny was crying? That doesn't seem like Danny at all. And Shawn wasn't funny or anything. You made him too grown up-ish.

Keep writing.
Anon chapter 17 . 5/4/2014
At first I thought it was an odd crossover, but I read it and I loved it! It was really good, and I really enjoyed it through out the whole story! This is defiantly going to be saved on my favorites and read again! Great job! w
Phantom Flickering Gundam-Ryuu chapter 9 . 1/12/2014
Lassiter acts way too much like Walker for my liking.
RandomCitizen chapter 13 . 10/5/2013
Another fight? I guess I still don't get it... :/ All of this left field drama feels...almost forced to me. :T Doesn't feel believeable...and doubt-ness is not a real word...Yeah Shaun might use it, but not Henry I think.
RandomCitizen chapter 10 . 10/5/2013
Ghost attack!
RandomCitizen chapter 9 . 10/5/2013
Lol way to leave Danny behind guys. XP
RandomCitizen chapter 8 . 10/5/2013
You made a funny typo earlier that said Danny turned them ignitable... XP

And Danny kinda jumped on the whole "dont trust you anymore " thing... did the stress get to him? :/
RandomCitizen chapter 6 . 10/5/2013
...Shaun was serious there. I mean, he is capable of being serious in a way, just usually deflects that with jokes. Like when Holmes deflects his caring with being an a-hole. :P

And Danny wants him to find out allready? Why is that? It's not as though they went through much significant together for that.
Oh, and how is the triple murder going? Who were the victims? You didn't give any names or clues about what was going on in the part of the plot that started all of this. Don't forget that as a crossover there should be a more balanced mix with the murder plot. Make me follow along and want to figure out the culprit.
And all the cops can't put ALL of their focus on the Fentons with a muderer on the loose, that would seem to be their priority.
RandomCitizen chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Wait wait wait- Was Danny shot in his HUMAN form? I'm wondering why they're not connecting a ghost and a boy of the same first name with a gunshot wound. And the parents are just arrested just like that? :P
RandomCitizen chapter 4 . 10/5/2013
Wha-! Kidnapping? How'd it get to that? They thought a group kidnapped a ghost in that short of time? :T
RandomCitizen chapter 3 . 10/5/2013
I assume that was Sam? Huh, I wonder why she'd suggest a hospital knowing his healing factor... Though someone has to get the bullet out if its still in. :3
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