|Reviews for Single Candle|
| alix33 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
" 'Penny Leonard', a name she and Gibbs had stolen from McGee's book, was his housekeeper." - Thanks, Tim!
"What do you want for your birthday, Jenny? More than anything?" He heard her laugh over the phone. "To kiss you in the NCIS elevator. We never got a chance to do that." Jethro chuckled. "We did manage to make out in the Director's office, though." "I still don't know how Morrow didn't catch us! Especially as your hand was…places it really shouldn't be in the Director's office!" - I am sorry too that they did not get to do those things.
I haven't felt this way about a woman since Shannon." Ducky paused and put his tea cup down. "Not even about Jenny?" - Ducky is SO going to blow Jenny's cover any millisecond, I can FEEL it.
"Whatever was going through his friend's mind, Ducky was glad he was happy. He knew this Penelope would be in for a lovely treat for her birthday. When Jenny had turned a year older when all three of them had been in Paris, they had gone up to the Eiffel tower, although it was only Jenny and Jethro who had stayed long into the night. Ducky hadn't dared wait up for them; he knew they were out celebrating more than just her birthday. A scalpel clattered to the floor as Ducky realised it was also Jenny Shepard's birthday that weekend." - Cover blown, I think.
"Tony looked exhausting - they had been working this case for thirty six hours straight and had ultimately failed." - Did DiNozzo not look "exhausted"? When he cannot stop teasing Ziva and Tim in the bullpen for all the money in the world, he IS "exhausting," though.
"but then she had only had her grandparent's dogs growing up," - Did Jenny have only one grandparent, then?
"I Know What You Did Last Summer?" "Pissed off a Mexican Cartel, wasn't it?" Jen teased. He smirked. "Actually most of my summer was spent thinking about making love to a beautiful woman." "Ms Hart on your mind?" Jen shot back, remembering the occasional call that she had got where Jethro had been cursing the lawyer. Jethro, in response, shook his head and bopped his lover on the nose. "Behave, Jen, or I'll have to handcuff you." - EW! I hope Gibbs did absolutely nothing of the kind with that icky M. Allison Hart!
| DCIPHOENIX chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Awww... This was really very beautiful! Very well written. A really packed chapter full of so many themes etc... I loved it. Brilliant.
Love the dog, i'd think if Jenny was a dog she'd be a Spaniel. Cute and fluffy but can still bite!
Like how it bit Gibbs and Gibbs yells at it! Poor Gunny. Not being loved by a pooch. ;)xxx
| MissJayne chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Loved it! Absolutely beautiful. Love the way you write Gibbs' conflict over what to tell his friends and how to keep Jenny safe. And the puppy is so cute!
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Couldn't stop laughing at Tony's delicate ears. Gave me an idea for a one shot. Not based on your story or anything but it reminded me of someone. Love the idea of Jenny having a puppy, not sure but it's cute. Okay if this is before Mike's death will that factor in?
| funhog316 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
hahah! I could totally see Gibbs threatening to handcuff a dog! love the story! :)
| Mrs. Elizabeth Gibbs chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I like that there was that moment at the end, of bittersweetness. Perfect ending to an otherwise cute story. I really do like this California series-I love how comfortable Jenny and Gibbs are with each other and their relationship. Loved how Ducky connected Jenny's birthday with 'Penelope's'. Great job!
| hopesmom chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I am sooo loving this series. And thank you for using my suggestion on the puppy name, it just seemed fitting. I think I smell a Gibblet on the horizon lol
| HuddyJibbsAddict chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I loved it, so cute
Jibbs and the puppy are adorable
Ducky is starting to put the pieces together, interesting
Want more ;-)
| MatteaAM chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I don't even know where to begin enumerating things a loved about this fic. Dog's name is awesome. I'm glad Ducky figured it out; Gibbs sure needs someone to talk to about this. I like Jenny's name. I'm honestly sick of people giving her names that are so much like Jenny Shepard, it's ridiculous. I giggled at the Muse Watson/Mike/I Know What You Did Last Summer reference.
The characters are very much in character and I'm enjoying this series immensely!
Now please, oh please tell me that you're planning on writing the next one after Mike dies. I just think that would be utter perfection for this universe. *.* M. xx