|Reviews for When the River of Charn Ran Red|
| epain chapter 1 . 2/14
Interesting point of view. Helel looks a bit like "Hell". Was that intentional?
| WillowDryad chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Oooooh, really, really good. I love the backstory on the Word and the rings.
| Elessar chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Wow...wow. That's just about the only thing I can say. :) You've painted a beautiful, dark, and mysterious picture that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Wonderful job!
| Queen Charlotte the Courageous chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I love this story! I think you captured Jadis' personality perfectly and I think that the way you weaved in the words from 'The Magician's Nephew' was very clever. I always wondered who Jadis learnt the Deplorable Word from and where Mrs Lefay got the box of dust and I think that this story explains that really well. I really enjoyed reading this.
| Eavis chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Ah! That was very clever of you - very clever indeed. I had not thought to make that connection; Morgan Le Fey and her obtaining the dust from Jadis. But it makes sense - as much as anything Jadis did makes sense.
And I love how /good/ you are at entwining your own creation and Lewis' words almost seamlessly. If I hadn't read all these books more times than I could count I probably (at least in places) couldn't tell the difference. Well done.