|Reviews for The Mysterion Mythos: Cthulhu Fhtagn|
| MelissaOnTrack111 chapter 28 . 1/22
Holy shit. That was easily the BEST South Park fanfiction I have ever read. Your takes on the characters- brilliant. The stuff on Butters had me sobbing. I have never seen his character swerve like that. The beginning with him finding peace with Majorine to sinking so low with Chaos was like the coolest character arch ever. I was completely impressed by everything you did with this. You have defiantly earned a favorite. Fantastic job.
| Mattysones chapter 32 . 1/5
Oh boy, that was a ride! And it only took me two weeks to get through it. Congratulations of finishing this monster, if it was only two years ago. I'm very sad to see it doesn't have more reviews.
Just some parting criticisms as a reader: I think maybe you played Kyle's need for logic a little too much. I finally saw the episode this fic refers to for his powers, and it seems like such a throwaway line to focus on, especially when Kyle is such an emotional character in general. I'm not saying he doesn't always make sense, but he seems to go on gut feelings more than anything.
That's of course, a difference in how someone reads the character.
My biggest criticism is that the narrative between characters got a bit repetitive, especially when they're about to enter R'lyeh and everyone's like "we can do it!" for three chapters at least (none of which are short).
Kenny suffers from the same repetitiveness with his need for normalcy and not to be cursed.
I don't think anything would have been lost if you had cut a few monologues of pep talks and Kenny's thoughts. This fic was long enough to warrant it.
On another note: I think the most interesting thing about Butters is that he really is the personification of chaos. Chaos from his parents, from his inner identity, from the results of his actions, and things just constantly going wrong for him. Of course he didn't realize it, since what he /sought/ was external chaos, which sort of solidified the chaos in himself.
Excellent thematic writing. Bravo!
Anyway, good luck with future projects, and I thoroughly enjoyed this :
| Mattysones chapter 28 . 1/3
Oh Kenny. KENNY. I just know he'll win!
Only three chapters to go!
| Mattysones chapter 27 . 1/2
AHHHHH but it seems like Marpesia is reaching him? I'm so unsure about Butters!
| Mattysones chapter 25 . 1/1
Oh boy the beginning of the end. Will Butters recover? Will Stan and Kyle be the only ones who slip? Will the Coon stick to his guns?
I guess I have to read on!
I'm glad Stan and Wendy made peace.
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/30/2013
I did not see Karen coming from a mile away.
But is she a shadow too? I'm guessing she always knew about Kenny.
I guess I'm going to relinquish my suspicion of Red at this point. THAT COULD HAVE BEEN YHE PLAN ALL ALONG THOUGH. M
| Mattysones chapter 23 . 12/26/2013
I was wondering when Mintberry Crunch would come in ahahahahaha
I hope Cartman comes back though. I'm hesitantly rooting for him.
STILL not trusting Red despite the altercation with Chaos previously.
| Alyssa chapter 11 . 12/26/2013
Really cool and creative. It's written professionally like a book characters are owned by South Park's Trey Parker and Matt Stone, but this fan fiction took skill and time. I like how the story was a "i have to finish this" kind of thing. I really enjoyed the explanation of the word love and how Stan felt about it. I also like the flashbacks of earlier has some mature content (which i like) and i definitely recommend for ages 14 and up to read this.
| Mattysones chapter 20 . 12/22/2013
Kyle didn't have the meltdown I predicted but I was right about the crisis!
"Look at me. Hi."
UG. THESE TWO.
Still not sold on Cartman but I hope he continues to come through.
I sense this the calm before the storm.
| Mattysones chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
I'm very sad for Butter's downward spiral. He tried so hard to be good and he IS but... well, I hope he snaps out of it.
I'm glad to see Cartman taking a more prominent plot related role. Poor Kenny. I really don't think Cartman intended for that to be a thing. I guess I'm worried Cartman will find his own agenda eventually even though he's only been helpful so far.
I think Red is the Messenger because Kenny's life sucks.
I'm glad Kyle had his cry on Stan. He needed it. I'm also glad to see that you as a writer are taking your time getting these two together. I have a feeling Kyle's going to have a huge existential crisis when Stan comes out to him on top of everything else.
I really like this story.
| Mattysones chapter 14 . 12/20/2013
KYLE. OH KYLE. JUST KYLE.
And Kenny! Being an unintentional asshole by taking everything for granted. At least he realized it.
I think no one's giving Craig enough credit for being a ya know, decent human being.
Loved you playing the voice actor card on Clyde. Although there's a few characters like that :')
I'm still plowed by how much Kyle lost his shit. Just wow.
| Mattysones chapter 9 . 12/19/2013
KENNY YOU'RE GOING TO GET YOUR HEART BROKEN I JUST KNOW IT. I do not trust Red!
I loved the ricochet with Stan and Kyle. Actually I just love their interactions in general... Stan being the idea person and Kyle being the logic! Pardon me my shipping is showing.
I was hoping Wendy would be able to seperate the league from normal life a little easier, but it seems ridiculous that the boys would think that such a close knit group would be able to in the first place. If Craig is any indicator. I think he'd be the most likely to say "what
made you think there's a difference between the vigilante and the civilian?" because he's real like that. I don't blame him for feeling betrayed by Clyde and Token.
| Mattysones chapter 5 . 12/18/2013
I was concerned over the length of the story but I'm really enjoying this so far! I decided to review as I go do to length :)
Kyle's first narration I was a little disapppointed with because everyone else started with such strong personalities, and right now he just feels like a third-person entity to move the plot along. There is next chapter though!
BUTTERS. I've never quite seen Butters written this way. I find his desperate need fpr escapism fascinating and can't wait to see what Marjorine's role is... which, I assume she has a plotful purpose eventually since you went to such pains to introduce her.
I'm extra suspicious of Red now that you made a point to, sort of, disregard her.
This story is so exciting!
| Anon chapter 14 . 8/26/2013
*cries because butters is probably going to accidentally destroy red and kenny's relationship*
| Anon chapter 2 . 8/24/2013
I just had a feeling it was Wendy! Ha ha ha! X)