Reviews for Forgotten Birthday
GhostWrtr chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
BEST_SEX_SCENE_EVER! *μ*

Lovely story, unlike most fanfic I think you portrayed their dynamic incredibly well. Some can pull it off in their interactions but you went beyond that and got it just right in the sex scene. That is incredibly hard to do, major props for that!

It was amazing, Ciel had the perfect balance of dominance and hesitation. Sebastian had just the right amount of teasing, torturing and endearing.

So yeah,

Ciel torturing Seb 3
Yaoi fan girl 666 chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
SEXY FIC;) this is the most smutty fic I ever read well done and continue;)Xxxx
JezebelStrike chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
I love this! Great job
Moonlightdarkness724 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Wonderful one-shot! ;D
RandomReviewer8D chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
This is SO late but i just wanted to review such an amazing, WONDERFUL, story that made me nosebleed and squeal in so much delight! You write so beautifully and your one of my favorite authors 8D

Please write more stories like this. You have such a good talent, don't waste it!
Lilith Evanson chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
You're responsible for my nose bleed, thank you.
Akumaide chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Hmm~ Very nice. Very nice indeed. Very cute, with the birthday cake too. Very good. I definitely enjoyed it. Thank you.
Porn.Mercenary chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This was really an adorable sort of romantic story. It wasn't sappy adorable, but that, "it makes you smile like an idiot reading about Ciel trying to be a good person and failing until he gets it right and Sebastian is more than cool with that" sort of romantic. I think my favorite scene was the whole cake present one. It was funny, cute, and sweet at the same time. Loved it!
LucasFalling chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Oohh hot damn that was amazing! Very.. Descriptive. -nosebleed-
nyanyakate chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
YES! Beautiful! *tear*
yvoi chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
WHOA DUDE,

That was too awesome for words!

Bravo! *claps*
getsome chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
i loved it!~! excellent writing and i loved the story plot, great job!
chocolatebunnyears chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
This was really quite lovely.. just delightful... hee!
etani chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
WAAA I LOVED IT! I loved every single part of this story! The idea of the mating seasons for demons and angels, the birthday gifts, the scene at the end, EVERYTHING! I also liked how you write Sebastian's love for cats!
kammy147 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
I love every bit of this story, except maybe the sex scene since it's still a little too graphic for my taste hehe.. but it's a great story, I love how it centered around Ciel trying to find out Sebastian's birthday 3 The interaction between the two was also an interesting read. I wonder what Sebastian said in Ciel's ear... XD

Anyway, this is a very lovely story and thank you for sharing it with us here on fanfic!
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