|Reviews for Unexpected Guest|
| ImmortalPhantom22 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
I like how you jumped right into the story there! haha, sometimes I tend to drag out the boring openings for too long.
Aw, poor Paulina.
I loved when Danny gave his 'cocky super hero' remark there! Haha! Go Danny! XD
Please continue with Danny and Dan's fight! :D
| Anon87654 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
yea, i noticed how it just seemed to get less and less serious. haha. i can never keep things serious, so i hear where your coming from. i could imagine Dan and Danny, just kind of standing next to eachother, laughing at Paulina's expense. And then out of no where get back to the fight.
Cool story, i'd recommend finishing it, it seems worth it.
| dkareipfocunoeirunciusyf chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
THAT WAS GREAT! (except for the swears) If all your stuff is this good, I'll be very happy.
| Danny Phantom Phanatic chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
DEFINATLY INTERESTED! its really good and you just jumped into the action which i happen to be in the mood for right now, so awesome job and i hope you continue this!