|Reviews for Retroactive|
| Fudgecicles chapter 1 . 1/10
love the inner snape voice
| dragoncreators chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
This... Was sweet, and funny, refreshing, sad, hopeful and wonderful(ly!) awesome. Oh Luna, she deserves so much more... She is one of my favorite characters (of all time.) Please keep writing your Bizarre, sad, amazing and emotional stories, and keep writing your very own.
With Love Aurora
| lipasnape chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
exceptional, refreshingly alive
| Baradine chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Man, that ending just made me sad ...
Good story, though!
| dreammyth chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
I like the story but wish it was continued.
| Navn Ukjent chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Nice little story.
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
| Lovegood Loves Good chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
So what happens when Harry eventually finds out about the obliviate, assuming he ever does of course...
| Racke chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
Not sure how much humor this is actually... Wonderful it might be, jokes it might contain, but it's... not humor-ish in its peculiar seriousness. Even if Snape made me laugh every time that he opened his mouth.
It's interesting to read a story where Luna reacts a bit towards the normal end of the scale when faced with the possibility to falling in love. The waterfall is beautiful and wonderful, but powerful in its dangers.
| TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Interesting story. I wonder if you intend to build another piece to go with this one?
| Covante chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
This seemed to be canon compliant, sort of anyway. Only discernible change I could pick out is he already knows the prophecy before Dumbledore tells him. When you include the bit about interfering enough to keep their previous selves alive it seems to fit rather well and makes the six 4th and 5th years beating a dozen hardened death eaters who only had orders not to kill one (possibly two if Neville is on Voldemort's reserved list as well) of them, and that particular one happened to be the one holding the thing they are trying to avoid breaking when the kids split up, much more likely.
So assuming this is canon compliant then come Christmas when Luna is pointing out that Harry jumping out from undeneath the mistletoe is a a sensible thing to do to as it is likely to be infested with Nargles will she regret that obliviation?
| Mastering My Life chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
that went from very entertaining and funny to... well... sad.
poor luna and harry one of my favorite ships shall remain unresolved
| Aealket chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Very fun. I'm glad you wrote this bit of fun flight of fancy.
I'm sorry Kappa Luna stole that memory, but maybe she will be able to return it someday.
| KMH1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
I really like how you wrote Luna. Many people make her completely nonsensical, but you put a great blend of eccentric yet compassionate. Thanks for sharing. :)
| Chargone chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Normally, i can get a pretty good handle on Luna...
in this? ... i dunno... it's like... i Almost get where she's coming from, but somehow that last little bit i'd need to understand eludes me.
it's kind of frustrating, actually.
still, Luna's awesome and this fic's pretty good :D