|Reviews for Unspoken in LA|
| DelphineCormyay chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
LOVE IT! Love their thoughts :) AMAZING!
| centava chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I think you captured Castle's POV well, but Kate's, I'm not sure about...it's a bit of a stretch for her to assume he doesn't want her simply because he didn't sit in the living room for long after she walked away...
I like your style, though, and look forward to more of your stories!
| SarahlovesA chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I love this! The two POVs are so well done. I wish you were writing for the show! He says he needs a cold shower. After reading your stories, he's not the only one! You know, Tiff, you are not just a fanfic writer. You are a WRITER. And there are not many of the genuine article out there. I myself am a fanfic writer,which is not a bad thing to be. But there are a few people on this site who go beyond that. You are one of them.
| DeadPigeon chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
It's amazing what all goes on in our heads between the spoken and the unspoken. Nice job!
Note: If you live somewhere in the south, it's too late to find you. You've withered up and died along with the ivy and forget-me-nots. Sorry.
| mobbs fellow chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Nice. So true. Thank you.