Reviews for Return of the Cahills
Quiet Hiker chapter 34 . 10/21/2012
Awesome... Is there an update coming?
Guest chapter 34 . 10/16/2012
Updaaate
CloverThyne chapter 34 . 10/15/2012
Dun dun dun. Jonahs in trouble...
That was such a good chapter. Please update soon :)
LovelyLadyElf chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I love your stories.I have read all 6 of you going to post more stories?Please respond.
Kitkatrox chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
awesome book
catdreamer39 chapter 34 . 10/7/2012
Hi, there. I just read through this entire story, and I love it! It's well written, the characters are pretty much IC, and, frankly, I like it better than the actual CVV books (shh, don't tell anyone!). :D I was so mad when I discovered the Vesper mole on the Shatterproof mission that I no longer love them anymore. Also, I don't like the character developments either; Dan is so SERIOUS. I hate that. Oh, and by the way, I ship MollyxDan as well. :P
Guest chapter 34 . 9/30/2012
You are such an awesome writer!##!:) ;)
MyselfxP chapter 34 . 9/15/2012
ARGH! GARH! Need... more... chapters...
Could you please make another chapter? Pretty please? With icecream, and marshmallows, and chocolate, and smarties and everything that you ever want!
I could also bake a cake for you...
Perhaps you're getting to the conclusion that I'm trying to bribe you ;)
But it's just so GOOD!
Please make more chapter, SOON! xD
Vintage Apocalypse chapter 34 . 9/8/2012
That was really cool.
I just read the whole thing and it took me like four days. I loved it.
Ya know you should update soon. That sounds like a good idea.
Yeahh you should do that. You are a reaalllyy good writer.
Guest chapter 34 . 9/8/2012
I love Ned and Ted Starling! Please include them more ,'cause, girl? *glares seriously* I needz mahz Starlingz... (I use that expression on a daily basis)
Hopeful Smile chapter 34 . 9/7/2012
Thats what Im about to do. go back and re-read
clara0414 chapter 34 . 9/6/2012
Oh! I'm so sorry. You'll forgive my horrible memory, right? (I /did/ start reading this almost a year ago.)

"There was suddenly a knock at /the door/. Amy put down her plate of scrambled eggs and went to /the door/." - Nothing wrong, but you know, if you read it out loud, then... it's a bit repetitive.

"I go it." - I'm not sure whether it was intentional, since he was eating chocolate - but he seemed to speak the previous sentences fairly well.

I kind of like Jonead now. But it is nice how you incorporate many different pairings. :)

Until next time.
Guest chapter 34 . 9/6/2012
I love this story! Please continue!
slurpie97 chapter 34 . 9/6/2012
O.M.G.

You have Shatterproof? Our bookstores here are so outdated I really want to shout at their owners...anyways, it's adorable, as always, and as for Molly...

"I'm a Natan shipper! Yo get yo hands off Danny boy!"

:)))

Anyways, I know "what am I doing reviewing when I could be resuming TA"? Well, I'm having a LOT of trouble with schoolwork right now and I really wanted some pick-me-up. A fic was perfect. And this did just the trick!

PS. GO JONEAD!
PPS. I know you just said there's no Jonead but I'm keeping my hope high... xD
PPPS. I want SHATTERPROOF
The Gone Angel chapter 34 . 9/5/2012
Shatterproof made me cry wayyyy too much. Too much Jamy. And Sinead framed Ian. D:

FYI, Sinead sounded too evil to be the Vesper Mole! D: I still hope it's not true!

And...wait...Why can't it be Jonead? /whines/

Gone
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