Reviews for Her Name Is Alice
jinx1764 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Very cool! I love it, the way you mixed Alice in wonderland with Labyrinth. Good dialogue between your characters, the all seem accurate so far. Excellent grammar and sentence structure, I only found a couple small errors but that's no big deal. I have them all the time. Near impossible to completely eliminate without tons of editing.

Can't wait to see where you go with this!
Meus Obsequium chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
A great start to what promises to be a wonderful story! I cannot wait to read more... please tell us you have more? :) It reads just like a sequel. Love it!
sparklingdmnd chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Absolutely wonderful start! I love the idea of Sarah given the powers to wish for things...even such as seeing Jareth again. I love how he calls her Precious. Sounds like something he would say! More please, already in love! :)
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