|Reviews for Hachin|
| Cuine chapter 1 . 5/2
Hello! I write you anonymously because I don't have an account xP
and don't have much time so it will be fast hehe
I just wanted to say that I really LOVED this story! at first I was a little reluctant to read it by the M but I'm so happy to have given it a chance! I was so hooked that sleep very late to read xD still dont read the sequel but I'll do it very soon ;D
and well, I have a little gift for you! I made a drawing and I really hope you like it!
fav. me/ db7y9wd
*if the link dont work just go to cuine on deviantart xD*
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 4/10
Review down from the last is a mistake, wrong story.
| Cooljoe64 chapter 12 . 2/3
| FangirlAlertWatchOut chapter 8 . 1/22
I love this story so far! These two make such and interesting couple. Both have had responsibilities placed upon them early in life, both have been isolated in some fashion (Moana through her love of the ocean and Elsa both figuratively and literally) not to mention the unique powers/abilities (both of which are water based). I have to say, Moana/Elsa had never even occurred to me until I read this story, but now I'm completely converted! The other couple I think would be adorable is Ariel/Moana, but there isn't any stories about them on fanfic...yet
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
You are amazing I honestly think that you should write a book, I could read this over and over for the rest of my life. This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I have read a LOT of books/stories. I hope that you update soon! Los of love
| Guest chapter 17 . 10/17/2016
Wow, just...wow. It took me hours to read, but it is by far one of my favorite stories on this site. Again, I say WOW!
| AnberlinEve chapter 17 . 8/29/2016
If someone had told me Mulan would end up leading the Huns and becoming one of their own and marrying the Shanyuu I would have laughed my ass off. But reading this, I'm again astounded at the wonders fiction, and fanfiction, can do. The world building was great, the plot makes sense and most of all the characters and their background stories and motives are all superbly dealt with. In here, Bataar was no longer a random Disney villain. No, he and the Han culture and history became something so much more. Rich, alive and most of all believable. You have created a wonderfully believable and deep story out of a classic movie and myth. I especially loved the cultural differences the two races had and more than that, how their history and differences slowly became melded into one that was mulans chosen fate. It reminds of Mongol or Tibetan customs and *cough* yeah the game of thrones horse tribes. Certain times I'm just matching similarities to a certain Mother of three dragons*cough*. I love the relationships Mulan cultivates and changing dynamics with each of the characters, and how her marriage with Bataar is out of respect as equals. It adds to the believability of the story considering the timeline. And no doubt, back in ancient China without the Disney fanfare, she wouldn't have gained her freedom in the Chinese dynasty as she would be happier in the open grasslands. Bravo! This is the epitome of world building, ingenious characterization and plot ravelling. Often times, it felt I wasn't just reading a fanfic.
| Krirenam chapter 17 . 8/9/2016
This story was AMAZING! I know you finished it years ago but I still thought I would tell you that people are still enjoying it. I loved the characters. They were true to the movie but still had your own flair on them. It was so much fun seeing into the Hun world.
Also, the two of you worked together amazingly! I occasionally write with friends and we are never on the same page. Collaborations are hard but you two pulled it off amazingly.
Thanks for the time you put into this and welcome to my favorite author list.
| xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 1 . 7/18/2016
Oh dear lord…. as a OTP Mulan/Shang shipper…. what am i doing. But then again, I am always open to other potential ships or rather certain pairings within certain fanfics! XD
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/6/2016
This was sooo amazing to read. Like seriously, so different to anything I've ever read before. If the real Mulan was aimed at older people, I think this storyline would be fantastic. It would work, and I'd probably go to see it a few times. Well done!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/5/2016
That was so exciting. Bataar definitely didn't see that coming.
| Erlangga Andika Yudha chapter 17 . 7/4/2016
For a story that retains a lot of themes that were in the original movie, the outcome is far more realistic. And author(s), you've managed to confuse me, whether I should be disappointed or delighted at the ending? None the less, this story has one of the best realistic-inclined plot I've ever come across in .
| Erlangga Andika Yudha chapter 10 . 7/4/2016
Ooookie dokie. Yep. You've mentioned it...a George R. R. Martin fan." And...as I've kinda become attached to this story, PLUS you admitted your admiration for our Mister Martin, I could only hope that the plot won't grow predictable. Only hoping, though. I'm reading this story with a 'complete' tag on. Nothing will be changed as far as I'm concerned. It's been nice this far
| Erlangga Andika Yudha chapter 8 . 7/4/2016
Was it just me...or did you gain some of your inspiration from George R. R. Martin's Game of Thrones? After reading 8 chapters I just couldn't ignore some similarities between Mulan's and Daenerys Targaryen's situations...
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2016
It took me a few chapters to really get into this story, but I'm actually really enjoying it now. You wrote Mushu excellently, by the way. Really, really well done on how well this story is planned and written. A lot of research must have gone into this.