Reviews for Rebuild of Fear
The Prophet of Courage chapter 4 . 4/20/2017
Okay two things no child would forgive that easily I don't care how much of a coward or kind they are being abandoned and forced into dangerous situations is not going to help
TheDarkChronist chapter 20 . 2/15/2017
So... just seen this "rebuild". Is it any different from the original Fear or only a polished/corrected version?
Evil Made chapter 20 . 10/11/2015
I don't honestly remember the original Fear at this point but I enjoyed this immensely regardless.
Kaisei1011 chapter 20 . 1/4/2015
I expected it to be more than just Fear with better formating. I thought it would be like Rebuild was for Evangelion... Oddly dissapointed here, despite Fear being such good story, due to that.
Yoholic chapter 19 . 8/20/2014
I complement you on how you managed to tell such a large story in a mere 80,000 words. A lot of authors attempt to tell a story just as large with more words and then fail utterly. I liked the way you managed to get rid of cthulhu himself.
Yoholic chapter 18 . 8/20/2014
Another excellent fight scene between shigoki and cthulhu. I enjoyed you giving the old ones purpose beyond mere malice.
Yoholic chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
Too bad canon didnt have the flow.
Yoholic chapter 5 . 8/20/2014
Love your fights scenes. How is the rebuild different from the original
Yoholic chapter 20 . 7/26/2014
What a story.
gandalf chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
There is a Evangelion/Lovecraft T-Shirt.
hga chapter 20 . 10/10/2013
Magnificent, from beginning to end. This is a keeper.
Deadzepplin chapter 20 . 9/27/2013
That was a disappointing end
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 20 . 7/9/2013
wonderful work!
Calophi chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
So, uh, in this chapter you mention the accident in the bathroom which I remember from the original Fear (having read it this week). But you didn't re-write about the accident in the bathroom in THIS version, so it's a bit odd.

Otherwise I'm liking the extra details you are writing in that I felt were odd for being missing in the original.
Zexs chapter 20 . 1/18/2012
God how have I missed this one. Shinji's one liner to Gendo really brought everything full circle.

Shinji glanced back down at him. "Unfortunate." His voice was terribly cold. "I was hoping that you were ready to be a man."

Damn i wish that happened in the show.
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