|Reviews for Rebuild of Fear|
| gandalf chapter 1 . 3/1
There is a Evangelion/Lovecraft T-Shirt.
| hga chapter 20 . 10/10/2013
Magnificent, from beginning to end. This is a keeper.
| Deadzepplin chapter 20 . 9/27/2013
That was a disappointing end
| BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 20 . 7/9/2013
| Calophi chapter 3 . 4/11/2013
So, uh, in this chapter you mention the accident in the bathroom which I remember from the original Fear (having read it this week). But you didn't re-write about the accident in the bathroom in THIS version, so it's a bit odd.
Otherwise I'm liking the extra details you are writing in that I felt were odd for being missing in the original.
| Zexs chapter 20 . 1/18/2012
God how have I missed this one. Shinji's one liner to Gendo really brought everything full circle.
Shinji glanced back down at him. "Unfortunate." His voice was terribly cold. "I was hoping that you were ready to be a man."
Damn i wish that happened in the show.
| AKissAndAGunshot chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I loved the original Fear and I'm much looking forward to a rework, but why is it in Misc. Books? I'm pretty sure there's a separate Lovecraft section. Just sayin'.
| skywiseskychan chapter 20 . 7/25/2011
Heh, what a story, way to end evangelion with the loss of humanity. It amuses me to see the old victory through failure applied, and to see the inevitable occur when facing mythos foes.
| JMHthe3rd chapter 20 . 7/22/2011
Just finished reading the story last night. It's very good, better than CoaEG, and unlike many writers (myself included), you know how to tell a story in under a thousand pages. That being said, I do think the story could have used a little more meat on its bones. The pacing seemed too brisk (especially at the beginning), and while your prose was very efficient, another few thousand words could have fleshed out the descriptions and characterizations.
Also, some aspects seemed very undeveloped. Shinji's only interaction with Toji was getting beat up and almost killed, yet later he thinks of him as his 'sometime friend, sometime enemy.' When he thinks about how he has no friends, he mentions Aida as one (now dead), even though they never had any friendly interaction.
Just little things like that could have been fixed with a bit more fleshing out.
Anyway, loved the bittersweet ending. It was perfect.
| skywiseskychan chapter 5 . 7/21/2011
This story is really good. I love seeing an overly emotional Rei and this is the first crossover that I've read with the great old ones that seems to really capture the horror and madness inherent to the mythos. I look forward to reading what else you have written here and having the story unfold. This battle was a little confusing as I thought Zerogoki was unit one (despite the name), as referred to in the previous chapters, but it seems in this it was unit zero, and Rei's unit seems to be the brother of Shinji's female one though she seems to refer to it as a Her once. Though it could be she was referring to hearing both shinji and his unit one. Anyway aside from the slight confusion there it is a great story and chapter, and a little ambiguity and confusion can be a good thing in mythos.
| damoclesAngel chapter 20 . 6/21/2011
I gave this a go because I liked your other works. Fan of Eva... not too much exposure to Lovecraft. But despite that I liked the characterisations. Well done! Now, more Wednesday's Child please!
| Gamazek chapter 20 . 6/18/2011
This would be awesome of an Zeruel just so happen to stumble here from a wormhole or something. Even better if it was the real shinji in Eva 1
| ByLanternLight chapter 20 . 6/17/2011
Reminds me of CoaED, but with more coherency, less purple prose, and actually completed. 5/5.