Reviews for Critical Moments
TheRubyRed chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Even though it's been years you should think about continuing this it's really good!
StevieRae2011 chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Nice story. I liked it. TTYL!
everyrosehasitsthornxx chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
This is so sad!

I mean, yeah, he would have felt like that, but I think that it should have been more of Jace being all sad.

It was good, but it needed something to spice it up.

Like in CoG he said that he forced Hodge to let him find her and everything.

And I don't think he wouldn't have forgotten her name, but that was funny.

Poor Clary, and Jace. Second to last line was awesome: Somehow, he knew that this pretty face would haunt him for the rest of his life.

Really good job!


furyofthetimelords chapter 1 . 6/17/2011

That was brilliant.

Very, very nice. it shows how just one moment can change everything.

Keep writing awesome,

~Bookninja15 XD

Now I see you;ve got another oneshot written, I'll have a look now...XD

(and thanks for the shout out, ;P)