Reviews for Transparent
PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
This...wow, I'm left speechless.
Nice description, good portrayal of emotion, and one the best 400 word fics I've ever read. Not much to say except that I like this.
foggraven chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
sad but beautiful
YukiNoSamurai chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
A very deep speculation at Reiji's thoughts. I see you followed the scene up to a point, which in my opinion in the anime was too odd. They both survived getting shot in the chest and taking on countless impossible battles, then suddenly getting shot randomly. It was a cliff hanger because there was no say if Reiji were dead or not. Though I don't want to believe that it happened so simply and out of the blue. You took it a step further and plotted them both to die. Although sad, you wrote it in a very interesting way. I like the word choice and style.