Reviews for Transparent
prince of underbrush chapter 1 . 3/28
after years of holding it off I finally finished the anime. Am I admitting that I would have preferred them both being shot as opposed to that overt vagueness we were given?... maybe. Is the way you pulled it off an improvement? Absolutely!

Good work.
PopPunkRocker4321 chapter 1 . 7/11/2013, I'm left speechless.
Nice description, good portrayal of emotion, and one the best 400 word fics I've ever read. Not much to say except that I like this.
foggraven chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
sad but beautiful
YukiNoSamurai chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
A very deep speculation at Reiji's thoughts. I see you followed the scene up to a point, which in my opinion in the anime was too odd. They both survived getting shot in the chest and taking on countless impossible battles, then suddenly getting shot randomly. It was a cliff hanger because there was no say if Reiji were dead or not. Though I don't want to believe that it happened so simply and out of the blue. You took it a step further and plotted them both to die. Although sad, you wrote it in a very interesting way. I like the word choice and style.