|Reviews for A Sprig Of Baby's Breath|
| Sara Jaye chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Aww, this was too sweet. Poor Lowen.
| RisingSunfish chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
hhghghgh you wrote fic about Lowen ilu ;w; seriously, you don't know how excited I was when I saw this.
I think you pretty much hit the nail on the head with Lowen's characterization- so nice to see him written (mostly) seriously and sympathetically. Loved the scatterbrained narration, it suits him very well (although there did seem to be a few points where it broke POV, like when you described Rebecca as "hopeful and still feeling a little unbelieving"). I wouldn't know if he'd still be at the point 4-5 years later where he'd still be -fainting,- but that's a very handy tool for scene transition and I was guilty of it in the last chapter of my fic, so I understand.
Don't worry Lowen, you will be a wonderful father! ...even though your son ends up being nearly as neurotic as you are.
| patattack chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Nice. Funny when Lowen fainted.
| Trevor X chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
Finally... wouldn't pull up the review box for a while there.
It is pretty impossible to mention Lowen without cooking (or food). You managed it pretty well though; good work. _b