Reviews for Marten the wizard
Arwen17evenstar chapter 5 . 10/3/2013
Why am I enjoying Martin's hilarious imaginations of destroying Mab? XD
"You didn't give me a sword." bwahhahahaha! That's the reason?!
I think this fanfic should be renamed to "Merlin on drugs".
Nyssasaralee chapter 4 . 6/15/2012
OHMIMAB! this is brilliant! I cant imagine Mab in a bikini but I just loved every bit of this story!
vbngdjdsgtfkytorueuj5eyhwryhj chapter 4 . 9/16/2011
This is freaking awesome, you know that? The Mab/Ambrosia, Martin's attitude, Frik at the end...Awwww Mab said she needed him? How can he resist that? BUT he doesn't want to hurt the innocent fairies, so he might be forced to help her anyway! Bwahaha!
Arwen17evenstar chapter 4 . 9/15/2011
"We will smash crystals together, burn Christians…"

oh yeah that would be Mab's idea of fun lmao.

"Hit me with a pan?" hahaha!

"Did you now?" Mab asked in a low voice, as if Ambrosia had made some seductive suggestion.

WOOT! Mab/Ambrosia rocks!

"There was sadness in Mab's eyes before she hit her son across the face."

It's about time! Go Mab!

"He had none of the flaws she adored to manipulate."

awwww...*pets clever Mab*

"She searched her mind for those shameful words which were to be used only in emergency. "

another awww... moment :D

"knew he would be spending the next ten days unconscious on the floor."

ha! brilliant ending.

I love your writing. Every other line is hysterically funny. You can't bully Mab! It's impossible.
Suddenly Im Over Come chapter 4 . 9/15/2011
The awkward moment when you see Mab flirting with an old lady. Would be pretty cool though if Ambrosia had went young and all that again though. Mabie indeed :O Aww I hate how he's constantly trying to hurt her. *runs to Mab and huggles her* xx
Arwen17evenstar chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
You should be apologizing to Mab. I wanna kill that little brat. He even got a kiss from her! Do you know how many people would die for her smile let alone a kiss? XD
vbngdjdsgtfkytorueuj5eyhwryhj chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
Frik and Marten playing in the sand, I can just picture it! :) And Ambrosia at the end was AMAZING. As always, loved it and more soon!
Suddenly Im Over Come chapter 3 . 8/5/2011
Your brother is so fucking mean to Mab :O I am not amused, at all! *kills him* :O Aww Mab playing in the sand how adorable she's like me at the beach with the whole shade thing. xx
vbngdjdsgtfkytorueuj5eyhwryhj chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
I agree with Bellatrix 100%! How can he say such things about our Mab? I did laugh at the Isabella part :D but calling Mab ugly? Not liking her nails or her hair or her voice? Ignoring her? The whole time I was reading I was like Dude are you freaking blind?

Okay, rant's over :) Love the story, update soon!
Suddenly Im Over Come chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
:O omfg! I am not amused.

How dare he insult our Queen's beautiful rasping voice, call her ugly, her pretty dresses and beautiful make up, her beautiful hair her sparkling glitter, her nails which are a lil short compared to mine but still :O How incredibly mean to insult the epitome of female beauty :O

"Serve me, dear Marten, or your darling young Nimue will become Isabella Rossellini."

That line was class!

Cant wait to see em at the beach :L xx
Arwen17evenstar chapter 2 . 8/3/2011
stop questioning Mab's voice you little snot.

Anime is bloody fantastic, it has so much ancient japanese myth in it.

The big robot genre is alright. I do specifically like Gundam Seed/Destiny a lot.

Why do I get the feeling your brother would not live a very long life?

""Serve me, dear Marten, or your darling young Nimue will become Isabella Rossellini.""

lmao! that would be a nightmare.

Is your brother reading this? Does he know it exists? lmao

Even if I wrote something like this, I kinda doubt I could get my brother to read it. sometimes, I tell him about my fanfictions and he says "ugh spare me. shut up about that movie already."

he'll watch almost any movie I give him, merlin, harry potter, lotr, etc. but he does not understand fandom. he watches the movie once and that's enough for him.

he's not a fan of anything except video games..
Arwen17evenstar chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
I don't really see a merlin, a majestic falcon, as a little bird or an unworthy name. A falcon is much larger than a robin or a sparrow for example.

Mab is the queen of air so it makes sense she would give her son the name of a fierce creature of the air.

"Can't you pick a name not starting with M?" Ambrosia said provokingly.


From Charmed, "hmm.. Another P imagine that."


This was a very bizarre little fic, but it was funny. I take it your brother is very annoying.
Suddenly Im Over Come chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
:o...:O...what the fuck did you do to Merlin :O or rather Marten...:O

Pmsl have to admit this is really funny Merlin being a girl's name and Mab's banter with Ambrosia and Frik. Now I know it's your brother and I'll say it again wth is wrong with him Mab is beautiful how can anyone ewww her. She's the most beautiful woman I've ever seen. xx