Reviews for The White Rose Painted Red
Guest chapter 6 . 7/13
I really love Veles and Loki. You wrote more than a fanfic, more than a story. You did what all truly talented writers do; You made 'real' characters. People with real personality and charisma that easily comes through the words.
AliceCullen3 chapter 6 . 1/24
Wings Of Mercury chapter 6 . 12/27/2016
I like that they brought him back, and I like that we got a glimpse into Gabriel's mind.

On the other hand, a lot of these sections were copied from White Rabbit with a few extra sentences added, and that was tedious to re-read. And the timeline was pretty confusing.
Littwink chapter 6 . 8/3/2016
The dates really screwed me up. Lols
TigremiLion chapter 6 . 11/8/2015
I have to admit that you definitely had the correct idea about this sequel/spin off. Just that the scenes that actually happened in White Rabbit seemed way to similar and kind of boring. Especially since I read both of those pretty much in the same day. Though the new parts were really interesting (like Gabe becoming Loki and his history that we didn't read about before) and it was a relief that you brought Gabe/Loki back.
TheCauldron chapter 6 . 10/14/2015
absolutely brilliant! I'm so glad you found a way to bring Loki back!
tanithlipsky chapter 6 . 3/12/2015
Glomgling chapter 6 . 2/6/2015
I really like the thing about Harry chaning into lowercase god.
It's like they are now sharing their life
A true couple !
ElysiumPhoenix chapter 6 . 8/20/2014
I've really liked this sequel. It was good to see things form Loki's POV.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/8/2014
does having another god in his religion make him weaker
Paxloria chapter 6 . 2/18/2014
That sure was a lot of writting.
It's good that Loki/Gabriel is back, though it suck that he got stuck with a name like "Perun." Might have been better to just invent something.

Its nice to know how things began & ended though.
It was also good to see Loki's meeting with Veles from Loki's POV. I'd been wondering how it was possible for Loki to see a glowing man and mistake him for a human, even a wizarding human.

All in all, Nice story.
Paxloria chapter 5 . 2/18/2014
In the Londen bridge pat Loki again is thinking that no one knows he was an angel, but thats wrong because his daughter Hel knows. I don't know yet if his other children know. Of if any of his kids have met Veles yet.
Paxloria chapter 4 . 2/18/2014
Nice chapter.

Just saying... In the "Fifteen years earlier" part is a small error in that Loki said that Veles if the only God that knows who He reallt is. The trouble there is that inthe previous chapter Loki's daughter, the godess Hel, mentions that she knows that Loki is an angel.
Paxloria chapter 3 . 2/17/2014
I guess all this is Gabrial/Loki's life
Ice Night chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
Pretty great story, both of them were good
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