Reviews for Baby Steps
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Tigeresscrazy chapter 3 . 8/10/2014
Omg this is so awesome I feel for the poor kid if they really do use the name julienne lol I suppose there could be worse names lol I think being pregnant has caused Gwen to go crazy going swimming in ice cold water it's so nice to see the tender side of Kevin when you write about him crying during the ultrasound
Guest chapter 2 . 12/24/2012
i luvvvvvvvvvvvvv it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
cute!luv it and ur right!kevin's going to be a great dad!
Artimis1821 chapter 3 . 9/9/2012
Omg that last part was funny cant wait to see what happens next!
chloemcg chapter 3 . 3/23/2012
Hmmmm...I wonder whats happening next? Keep it up please, I'm loving it so far!
KoriCarrigan chapter 3 . 3/10/2012
this story is really good :) keep going
Mary Foster chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
please update soon x3 i love it *-* is just lovely :L
ItaSaku1 chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
Haha just to funny, though I'm getting sort of confused, the chapters skip around, like this should be the 1st or 2nd chapter.

ItaSaku1 chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
I love how caring you have Kevin being! This is awesome!
ItaSaku1 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
This is just so cute, love it!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/16/2011
I so love these names! Kevin and Gwen are so cute together...

You didn't see "Double or Nothing"... I can send you a link to where you can watch it when you get the chance through the PM on here... MoA did a great job with it, I was laughing my way through the whole thing... but I'll send a link to you vea PM thogh so you can watch it and get the full impact
ETNRL4L chapter 3 . 10/14/2011
Whoah! The stupid automatic spell check on my tablet totally messed up my summary! Sorry, Brandy.
ETNEL4L chapter 3 . 10/14/2011
This is going to take so long by the time I get done someone else will have done it already, but I love your writting and will do this for you. 'Double or Nothing' starts out with Kevin and Gwen at Burger Shack. Kevin pigging out, Gwen bored...Ben walks in and Kevin asks where he was. Ben says he was swamped by fans. Kevin scoffs that a few autographs don't take that long. Next they show a commercial on the TVs in the restaurant for some spectacle starring Ben in his alien forms; Ben freaks. So, they fly off to the show and the doorman won't let them in cause it's soldout until Ben goes alien and threatens him. Next, they are sitting watching this show and Ben is fuming, gut Gwen is all 'it's pretty amazing' until, get this, the 'Gwenettes' (10 dancing showgirl Gwen look-a-likes)come prancing out; now Gwen is pissed. After the show they go backstage to complain to the producer who turns out to be, you guessed it, Albedo. He explains that since he lost the ultimatrix, he had to figure out how to make a living and decided to capitalize on Ben's image. When Ben tells him to cancel the show, Albedo refuses, throws an earthquake device on the floor that starts bringing down the room on them and runs of. Ben goes after him and runs into Swampfire who does a piss-poor job at fighting and ends up going through a wall. Out comes Big Chill, who does just as bad abdominal has the whole backdrop of the stage fall on him. Finally, out pops Humongasaur with glasses on (yes glasses) and ends up pinned to the wall by Spidermonkey's web. Did I mention Humongasaur sounds like a neurotic Jew, it's pretty hillarious. So, Gwen and Kevin come out holding Albedo and he and the other 3 aliens come out and sit at the edge of the stage. Albedo goes into an explanation about how he used a deepspace communicator to cast the aliens for his show. Ben threatens to beat him up, but Gwen tells him that her dad's a lawyer and he could just sue if he doesn't stop the show. So, they are leaving and the Jewish Humongasaur guy comes up to them and tells them Albedo is really making a doomsday bomb. They go to the warehouse where the device is and all chaos breaks loose as Albedo activates thing while Ben tackles him. Kevin, Gwen and all 3 aliens(including Jewish Humongasaur) are fighting each other; there's a huge explosion from which Gwen protects Ben and Kevin. When the smoke clears they look for Albedo and see that he reverted back to his Galvan form and he explains that this is what the device was for all along, but he can also turn into the other aliens in the omnitrix at will, now. Jewish Humongasaur now explains he lied to get Ben to stop Albedo from turning normal because he didn't want to loose his friends. Suddenly, Albedo turns back from Ben's form to his own over and over. This makes him realize that Ben's interference with the ultimatrix during the experiment, caused an accident and he still can't maintain his true form. So, he gets pissed, attacks Ben as Rather and Ben knocks him out. The episode ends with the lawyers from the hotel the show was at coming to serve Ben with a law suit and him asking Gwen where her dad's at cause he's going to need a lawyer. You really should watch it. MOA did a way better job at it than I just did; probably cause they own it. LOL
Shepard20james chapter 3 . 10/14/2011
this is a great chapter, hope you update soon:D
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