Reviews for Walmart and the Waffle Theft
Laurie Lestrange chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
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Guest chapter 24 . 4/8/2012
That was brill and really funny have u started writing the squeal xxxx
JesusFreak AK chapter 24 . 9/27/2011
I just finished reading the story and I totally loved it. I was laughing so hard at Bella's line, "Fee,fi,fo,fum, this Bella's going to eat you. Yum,Yum." I was also laughing at the thought of if they ever made a little movie of this with the original characters,Kristen Stewart would have so much fun playing this scene. XD
JesusFreak AK chapter 24 . 9/27/2011
I just finished the story and I totally love it, I was laughing so hard when reading Bella's line, "Fee,fi,fo,fum, this Bella is going to eat you. Yum,Yum." I also laughed at the thought of if they made a little movie of this with the original actors, Kristen Stewart would have so much fun playing this scene!XD
Ayden K chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Dear bird of the dawn,

This is such a hilarious story so far, I am excited to read more. Since Bella is a Vampire (meaning Renesmee is there), do you think she will help her mom and aunt which will lead you to a whole new story causing a cosmic explosion in the Twilight world, destroying every waffle in it's path! Actually I do not even know if that is already put in here so I guess I will have to wait and read. :P But if you have not the next theft can be cupcakes, but that's GIR's job! XD I love GIR, he is just a bundle of pure cute awesomeness! I feel like a creeper now, I don't even know you and I'm writing random crap haha. Well love the story so far! 3

-JesusFreak AK
Amber101099 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
that was a good chapter
lileycullen chapter 24 . 9/2/2011
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elfspirit7 chapter 24 . 9/1/2011
Awesome! Thanks for the great read, can't wait to read the sequel!
lileycullen chapter 23 . 8/30/2011
lol
lileycullen chapter 22 . 8/30/2011
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AshleyAndSethAlwaysAndForever chapter 23 . 8/30/2011
Haha love this story! Update soon!(: P.S. The Chicken! :D
Jaime2772 chapter 23 . 8/28/2011
Ummm... WTF? They were running away scared, then just started walking home? Ok...
narutosonlyfriend chapter 21 . 8/24/2011
...wow...that was wow
Jaime2772 chapter 21 . 8/23/2011
What the fuck? Wow... Haha!
lileycullen chapter 21 . 8/23/2011
lol
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