Great story thanks

Story had great potential but falls short because it lacks a clear path. There is little contend and much of what i writing falls more into the mystery trope because the author can't decide for himself if Dumbledore is a good or a bad guy, or how Harry doesn't check the Vault for any information on the armband. For a story where Harry encounters are more dangerous, feels pretty weak.

The story hand the potential to go OP, or confiant Harry, or Harry get Help, Harry gets Revenge or a so many others. But in the end we get a pretty weak Harry that has 0 control of his life, and is surrounded by adults that are incompetent, kinda like the canon.

OMG this is giving me a headache. I get that he is young and inexperienced but this is just acting stupid. Revealing your foci that is worth millions to the whole school? Letting the troll attack you without containing it first? Not even trying to understand your magic and taking everything at face value? Where is the cunning abused child? Where is the Ravenclaw intelligence? It’s hard to read.

This has been a marvelous story! I've enjoyed it immensely. :)
So, as I leave this page, I dearly hope there really is a sequel. There's so much to know!

What will this do to Shiva? I guess I stay tuned on this Bat Channel!

Oh deary me...I hope he isn't dead, dead. Poor Perenelle, poor Harry!

Did Harry not see the thestrals then? I mean, he did kill the professor at the end of the last year.

The Cerberus is in this story but isn't a summons like it is in Final Fantasy?

I don't understand why Harry didn't use his invisibility cloak.

I just imagined Harry say Banana like a minion to Flamel

Olivander flipped the sign on his shop to closed. "Come, Mr. Potter, Hagrid. We're going to go to Hogwarts and figure this out. I cannot give you a wand that would better match magic than mithril, and something of this nature needs to be brought up to Dumbledore immediately." He glared at Hagrid.

*rolls eyes* he is not a Dumbledore flunky. He would never drop everything and run to Hogwarts.

I love the wandmaker's reaction!

Like he couldn't believe that Hagrid didn't take Harry to the hospital, or tell Albus right away, no no it didn't matter that the boy could be in danger, nope must finish shopping.

Also gonna keep reading, but I hope Harry still gets his Snowy owl friend!

This Harry is a whiny little bitch. He has Shiva, someone who cares about him now, a alfriend always with him and he's somehow worse off than canon Harry. How does that make sense.

I absolutely loved this story! Thank you for writing this!

I'm quite sure you got inspiration for Shiva from the final fantasy games. I'm not familiar with all of them, but I am familiar with 10. Quite the interesting crossover.