Reviews for Harry Potter and the Summoner's Stone |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was a great read. Let me see if you got to the sequel and what else is in your portfolio. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was a good story, and I hope the next one is as good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This a heck of a story! I would love to see you write more. I hope you are well and that rel life will let you write from time to time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought that the common room riddle was bad, but now out of the blue Harry decides that he's a freak? Lol nope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rubbish, not worth it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and having read this far, I have one question. Is there going to be any explanation how Empress Shiva got connected to the Potter family? I like the Ravenclaws so far too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unique ideas. I dont know if its crossover or not about thrones, but it doesnt really matter if I am not aware of it. I like Draco ghost idea. |
![]() ![]() rofl so trash xD |
![]() ![]() eurgh so fucking melodramatic.. so shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story thanks |
![]() ![]() Story had great potential but falls short because it lacks a clear path. There is little contend and much of what i writing falls more into the mystery trope because the author can't decide for himself if Dumbledore is a good or a bad guy, or how Harry doesn't check the Vault for any information on the armband. For a story where Harry encounters are more dangerous, feels pretty weak. The story hand the potential to go OP, or confiant Harry, or Harry get Help, Harry gets Revenge or a so many others. But in the end we get a pretty weak Harry that has 0 control of his life, and is surrounded by adults that are incompetent, kinda like the canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is giving me a headache. I get that he is young and inexperienced but this is just acting stupid. Revealing your foci that is worth millions to the whole school? Letting the troll attack you without containing it first? Not even trying to understand your magic and taking everything at face value? Where is the cunning abused child? Where is the Ravenclaw intelligence? It’s hard to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has been a marvelous story! I've enjoyed it immensely. :) So, as I leave this page, I dearly hope there really is a sequel. There's so much to know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What will this do to Shiva? I guess I stay tuned on this Bat Channel! |