Reviews for Exploits
jackunzel chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
you suck stupid fucker!
margaret chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
and i hate you aughtor! and i hope some people will see my three comments. Hehehehe! you dont even know i am a bad girl
margaret chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
and one second taught rapunzel lives in newyork usa not in the 1763's?! her time today is like today! and she goes to shool,(not in hogwarts like wizardwizard stuffs)and gets other friends. not only the big4 is! and she has2 sisters and she is not obeyful
margaret chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
i hate you! how did you do this to the cool rapunzel! i know she is the fire queen,not sex-addicted! and rapunzels notmaried,inlove with boyfriend is rapunzels a coolgirl not a 10000000000percent supersuperduper girlygirlygirl[
elphesia chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
that was abslutely fantstic! you are an amazing writer! and its very long so it i was entertained for a long time! thankyouthankyouthankyou!
Erfsmurf chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
You don't need a whole bunch of ones with no detail, you need one with ALOT of detail. There is no such thing as too much detail on a sex scene.
JayLaw chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
That was fun! So adorable! Nice work.
-J
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Super hot
Princess Kathi of the Rhine chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Hmm...you said at the top that people just look in the M-rated sections for porn. What would you call what you wrote? The warning topper was unnecessary and confusing; I would have left it out altogether.

You are a pretty good writer with good flow, but the pace was a little speeded. But I enjoyed your style of writing very much, despite the speed. It seemed to work with your theme.

My main problem was how the characters were portrayed. If you wanted to make Rapunzel and Flynn different than their original characters, that's fine. But they both seemed very shallow.

Anyways, keep writing and I'll keep an eye on your works! I hope this feedback is helpful.
Skelegirl chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
ugh, i feel sorry for repunzel
suddenlysalad chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
lololol. eugene needs to learn how to keep it inside his pants. :D it was funny. I LIKED IT.