Reviews for Brutal Harry
Kagugu chapter 13 . 15h
thank you for your hard work
It's a first time I read someone reincarnated Lily that way (or really any way)
thank you
smit.sanghvi94 chapter 1 . 2/15
Brilliantly written chapter. Loved it. Can't believe at the level of feelings this single chapter was able to develop in me.
Corwyn chapter 13 . 2/1
Loved this story. Loved it. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us.
VioletBuckbeak chapter 8 . 1/28
SCIENCE! Too funny!
TheButterflyComposer chapter 13 . 1/12
That was amazing. Look forward to reading the sequel.
TheButterflyComposer chapter 6 . 1/12
Very, very interesting so far. As a clever child who knows plenty of others like this, I enjoy your articulate and detailed writings on this topic.
CalCyn chapter 12 . 1/12
I just thought I would note that he name you used for Harry's first kill was 'Vincent Goyle. In the next paragraph you stated that Gregory Goyle joined Vincent Crabbe. It's a little confusing. Other than that I love your writing style and ability to project images with your words.
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 12 . 1/11
this story was awesome, and I know what you're talking about with friendship. I have a friend that we have the same level of trust in each other as Hermione and Harry do, but that's not love, we both have love interests elsewhere. that amount of bonding between two people is beautiful, and you did a great job showing it. definitely reading the epilogue than jumping to sequel
objectivepersona chapter 1 . 1/7
Guest chapter 13 . 1/7
Way too many monologues. If you actually heard the dialogue being spoken, it wouldn't sound natural and would drag on for too long. There's also too much reliance on the dialogue to inform us of things. I also didn't enjoy how this Harry basically succeeds easily in almost everything he does and how everyone comes to fawn over and admire him. It makes him seem like a Mary Sue with a dark past. I don't understand why someone who is so secluded and aloof would gain so many friends and admirers. It's weird how everyone comes to utterly obsess and adore over Harry
Guest chapter 13 . 1/7
Way too much monolog
MoonWatersLight chapter 13 . 12/30/2016
This was a great read! I thoroughly enjoyed this and can't wait to start reading the next part to this series, but before I must, as they say, "Pay my complements to the chef!" I enjoyed the characters in here and their development. I especially enjoyed George Granger I must say. While some may have thought he ruined the vibe or whatever with the mix of seriousness and sudden joy, I thought he fit quite well. Must be because he fit with the whole thing of unhinged like Harry. Plus, he played a wonderful comic relief. The combination of reality and fiction was enjoyable (Or is it just reality? Fiction would automatically be assumed as it is a Harry Potter fanfic...? Haha, anyway). I loved the character progression as well. While I, rarely, came to disagreements on ways that some characters were portrayed I still enjoyed the story. I hope you don't take any offense to this admission as I do not mean it with any ill intentions. Your AN at the end was interesting to read and am happy you put that there. I always find stories equally entertaining as when I get to read the author's personal views on certain subjects and their differences in opinions on the book they're writing their fanfic about. I love to explore different sets of views and appreciate your share of opinion, though it saddens me to hear that your experience of harshness in life played an exponential role in this view. Though I am glad to know that life's sometimes cruelty hasn't ruled out the importance of love in your view based on the story. Again, thank you for this great story and I wish you the best in the way that life isn't just described as harsh or cruel.

P.S. I do apologize as it is very late that I am writing this review and tend to lean towards rambling and strangely philosophical when I'm tired. (If that makes sense XD)
Gallifrey denizen chapter 4 . 12/27/2016
wait what happened with voldemort on the back of the teachers head last year? and where's Lockhart?
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 13 . 12/21/2016
Really well written, I absolutely loved it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2016
Well fucking done you've said this fanfic was about abused Harry who wouldn't just magically revert into a normal kid and who is smart and not trusting but guess what, you've done the fucking opposite you piece of shit and made Harry into a headstrong idiot who isn't at all subtle so go shoot yourself you hypocritical piece of crap and please never write again
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