|Reviews for Brutal Harry|
| Georgia chapter 13 . 5/19/2013
I very much enjoyed your story. One of the failures of the original Harry Potter is the lack of understanding of abused and traumatized children so it was interesting seeing a more realistic view. I also really liked Professor McGonagall's reaction to finding everything out. Very proactive. Thanks so much for sharing!
By the way - misses is the plural form of miss, if you don't want to write Mrs then you can use missus in informal writing (such as fanfiction) but Mrs would also be quite correct.
| Greatazuredragon chapter 8 . 5/18/2013
Is it just me or does the tought of Hermione learning NUCLEAR physics give's you a enourmous sense of impending doom? We all will miss the days of the atom bomb...
| OldestOfTheYoung chapter 12 . 5/17/2013
That... was intense!
You almost had me in tears when you almost killed Hermione there at the end. Quite a wonderful story you've created here. Most people, when making Harry powerful and a bit mentally different than all the other characters, tend to have him either decay into an evil madness or heal so fast that by the end he's extremely close to normal. I like how you've progressed him just slow enough that I almost didn't recognize it until I really thought about it. :-)
| L.E chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
Great chapter! It was long, though. I can't believe you put a whole year into it! But I am wondering about a few things, namely Quirrel (wow, I don't think I've ever tried spelling that before). Was he Voldy in disguise or not? Will he be able to teach during year 2? And what about Harry's strong box? Is the stone in there? How are Dumbledoor and Flamel reacting to the theft? Do they even know its missing?
| L.E chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Just wow! This is some kind of great prologue you got here! I guess this the first dark!harry / powerful!harry story that I have been properly interested in. Well done! I can't wait to see where this goes!
I found this story by reading a recommendation in a comment to an HPMOR sub-reddit thread.
| lightskiller chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
could you please explain to me where harry got the bowie knife?
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
where did harry get the bowie knife?
| MusicInStillMotion chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
I am really enjoying ths story. It is well thought out nad written, with a believebale genisis for its characters. I think that actually writting about harry with a true acount of how an abused child would act makes this one of the better stories I've read on fanfiction. and I just have to say I LOVE uncle George.
| Lord Dragon Claw chapter 13 . 5/8/2013
Did you have compulsion charms hidden in the text? I was nearly late for work this morning because I was trying to finish Chapter 11 before I left.
And now I have to read the sequel!
(Only reason as to why I'm complaining: I'm supposed to be working on a fic of my own but I keep getting distracted.)
| Maedaa chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
So, I kind of loved your idea of making a different Harry, a little less optmist and more real. But after reading prologue and first chapter, I really hate Harry. Maybe in your opinion, to have a bad chilhood tends to make you unsociable, cold and weird (cause he is weird) but I don't think so at all, when you lived a lot of awful thing in your chilhood, you mostly seek for love, warmth, happy moment and all, you don't ultimately shot up to the world at all.
Mostly when you have the chance to see your life change completely by discovering an amazing word , lke the Hogwart is ...
And to make everything about him so dull too, it's almost amasing, The Troll-part amazed me by being so BORING, did Hermione had to be a fearful stunned girl and Harry the only one thinking of doing something ? It kind of got me mad .. LOL
I don't know , maybe I don't feel smart enough today, But I think I will stop for today and maybe comes back ... cause it is a great idea ...
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/7/2013
well unique ending. i like it
| Lord Dragon Claw chapter 4 . 5/7/2013
In response to the old AN: I too have seen some form of that cycle in Modern Society. While I have no doubt that things were peaceful in Dubai, I can't help but think that they have similar symptoms (if to a much lesser degree) to those of the West.
Part of the reason why I became a Brony - to combat this endless and vicious cycle of hate and pain.
| LBII chapter 13 . 5/7/2013
Nice Job! Thank You!
| Lilywonders chapter 13 . 5/5/2013
This story is absolutely amazing. I love the detailed account of the whole thing, and the logic behind everything. I completely agree with you about how Harry should be psychologically.
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/5/2013
i love uncle George! i find myself yelling his lines and making wild gestures with my arms great fun. you fic is awesome cant wait to finish this one and read the sequel.