Reviews for Brutal Harry
Guest chapter 10 . 4/18
Im suprised harry isnt gunning to take over britan cuz he could kill any enemies in the continent making it ‘safe’
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18
Im suprised lily didnt kill vernon with the first bout of abuse
Mastersgtjames chapter 13 . 4/10
Really? No Epilogue, no after hogwarts? i feel kinda ripped off. Where is the Science. Where are the sweeping changes to the world/society?
Honestly when Lily said she has been aware of everything... All I could think of is that it was unfortunate harry had started puberty...
Surprised Hermione's dad and them made no comment on her eye.
This really feels more like an abandoned story than a completed one.
All that buildup... just dropped. Philosophers stone? only good for gold. Science? just as a means of filler. Power/experimentation? MC got outdone by voldie and his mom, while hermione was practically helpless and a damsel in distress.
Mastersgtjames chapter 12 . 4/10
JESUS.
THIS IS SO STUPID
SUCH A LET DOWN.
He went into it TRYING TO FIGHT FAIR!?
You gonna tell me Hermione does not know how to apparate? or make a portkey? Or grab the cup?
WHY was voldie so tough!? He does not have Harry's innate shield, or his skills, or his anything besides his blood. HOW did he survive ALL of that BS!? Even more importantly... HOW DID HIS FOLLOWERS!?
Then there is this complete nonsense with his mom. I can get her using the ritual to be reborn too. Kinda. Sorta. maybe.
But wandless magic? Apparently she is OP too? for crying out loud man! ridiculous. Hermione is supposed to be this SUUPER smart genius, knows all of everything. But she is just going along with the motions? not helping harry at all? Did she even KNOW about those guns/bombs? pretty sure they both could have done better.
Mastersgtjames chapter 10 . 4/10
Okay, gonna say this right now. I Literally cannot see MC counting WINNING the tournament as freeing himself. It is essentially admitting he is powerless. Like someone being enslaved, and offered freedom if they do this one thing. Doing it may "free" you. But you will have lost whatever independence or hope you had.
gonna repost my previous comment as it is still relavent.
No idea why harry was not informed of the tri-wiz with how their luck has been.
You HAVE to admit that either you can enter someone else into a BINDING MAGICAL CONTRACT against their will and without their knowledge, which means you can do all sorts of things. Including enslave EVERYONE. OR. that the goblet does not apply to harry, and they are full of crap. Those are literally the only possible conclusions.
Mastersgtjames chapter 9 . 4/10
shocked he did not share the stone with hermione, she'd have figured out how to make more, how to make a single dose enough for eternal youth, as well as how to transmute any metal to something else.
Mastersgtjames chapter 8 . 4/10
Finally, the stone.
No idea why harry was not informed of the tri-wiz with how their luck has been.
Hope he puts voldies, or one of his enemies names in. He had BETTER argue if they try to force him to compete. Since you HAVE to admit that either you can enter someone else into a BINDING MAGICAL CONTRACT against their will and without their knowledge, which means you can do all sorts of things. Including enslave EVERYONE. OR. that the goblet does not apply to harry, and they are full of crap. Those are literally the only possible conclusions.
Mastersgtjames chapter 7 . 4/10
still no mention of the philosophers stone, or learning alchemy. No learning other languages, even though he was trying to make his own as a child. No comment about the now free basilisk, or what happened to that horcrux... Finally, REALLY surprised harry is not still studying mundane education. Cannot see him passing it up when it creates a weakness to do so.
Mastersgtjames chapter 5 . 4/10
Welp, that sucks. No pettigrew, no sirius.
Mastersgtjames chapter 4 . 4/10
Kinda ticked McGonnagal told the students about harry, really not her place and completely inappropriate.
So... WTF happened with the philosophers stone?
Hermione did not find ANYTHING else fishy about sirius black? Like the fact only a FINGER survived?
Never understood how the twins did not notice that scabbers appeared as pettigrew on the map...
Mastersgtjames chapter 3 . 4/10
Hermione's relationship to harry is gonna in some serious danger if/when he discovers her ratting him out. repeatedly.
Why is MC not using his summer to practice wandless magic or mind magic.
Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 4/10
So... Now that he is FINALLY aware of mind magic, hopefully he practices it more, maybe adds Mundane applications/meditations.
Definitely not a fan of Hermione both being innately better than the MC intellectually, or her being withdrawn from school.
Hope MC comes up with a means of immortality. Maybe his physical magic pushes him to a Peak State? or maybe he develops his own, better philosopher's stone? cuz that stone, while good for some dude in the 1300's, still leaves him looking like death warmed over and needed a new dose of elixir frequently.
Maybe MC can overcome the nonsense that is magic not working with technology? which makes no sense since most magical businesses and the ministry are located in central london...
Mastersgtjames chapter 1 . 4/10
So...
Surprised they would let Harry back with Petunia, but I'm betting Dumbledore.
Makes no sense that Harry has made no effort at all to improve his mind, no meditation, no mind palaces, no attempted telepathy or telekinesis. Especially with how common that all is in fantasy. Even more weird he did not try to find anything on it when he was looking for books.
Then there is the Goblins. MC learns he has a vault and he asks NO questions? no checking his vaults ledger, finding what properties and such he owns? no trying to suss out who has been handling his families affairs? MC is supposed to be smart, but more importantly AWARE(Paranoid).
Kinda bummed there was no touching on the possiblity MC could be a metamorph. What with how he NEVER cuts his hair, and the one time it was forcibly cut, it popped back. Personally, I am of the opinion that the reason harry was not always changing like tonks was his obsession with being normal and constantly reaffirming to himself and others that he is "just harry".
Surprised MC has not tried more methods to enhance the quality/quantity of his magic... like trying to cultivate or something.
Ursaris chapter 8 . 4/7
“THERE WILL BE! SO MUCH SCIENCE!” Got me giggling out loud like a giddy fool at work, gleefully kicking feet and everything.
chinalatina28 chapter 8 . 4/2
Why is Harry mad at snape after watching the memory? There was nothing in it about snape
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