|Reviews for Brutal Harry|
| darksidhe42 chapter 13 . 9/5/2013
I just finished the story. I had suspected from Mr Granger's Christmas toast on that you were a Christian. I agree with you 100 percent about love. I am currently in my second year at a bible collage prior to entering seminary. I think that there are not enough Christians who profess and have deep, fruit-bearing faith involved in secular activities like publishing fanfic. I wanted to say thanks for being brave enough to bare that part of your life, in spite of the flack I know you caught from internet trolls.
Now, on with the review... I love the story. I like Harry at the end, although I did not care for him in the first few chapters. As he began to develop, I really started to warm up to him. Hermione, of course, is awesome here. You also made good use of Luna without overexposing her. Too many authors either ignore her or misuse and misrepresent her. McG was awesome as well, from when she called Snape down, all the way to the end of the tournament. My favorite supporting character, though, without a doubt, was Gabrielle. Like Harry said, she's just cute. You did an excellent job portraying that. I loved her and just wanted to protect her. Especially if she has her sister's gifts. It will break my heart to see that happy, friendly little baby face the jealousy and lust that her teenage years have in store for her...
Again, great job, thank you so much.
| Beawr chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
| The 10th Wand chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
I like how the muggle services actually get involved instead of mind erased.
| PaulBlay chapter 11 . 8/28/2013
Hermione is testing out two years early? It's not very clear.
| Knowledge is a powerful tool chapter 13 . 8/26/2013
This story is... brilliant. It's interesting and quite dark, but the way you've made it, absolutely brilliant.
| marcuspgreen chapter 13 . 8/18/2013
I lined this story. Don't really have anything to say, just leaving a review.
| Burned-Out Sage chapter 13 . 8/17/2013
Between the title, which is uninspiring, and the cliches of abused Harry becoming an ubermensch, I wasn't expecting too much.
You've proven me wrong sir. Continue writing and improving on those hard moral choices.
| nice story chapter 13 . 8/17/2013
This is a entertaining story, but it has a MAJOR flaw in that everything revolves around harry. Normally the side characters would have their own life, but in this story everyone exists either to be a enemy or to devote their life to Harry's recovery. If they had their own lives in which Harry was just a part rather than center it would be more convincing.
Not to mention harry being completely overpowered, but I guess that a point of this story.
| bearblue chapter 13 . 8/17/2013
Amazing story. Thank you.
| XandyNZ chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
Read through everything in one sitting... interesting AU.
| Trade Master chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
I am.. was an atheist I consider myself firmly agnostic at the moment because people like you! and the people at my local church showed me that there are Christians out there who actually follow their god's rules! Although they still are annoying on the gay marriage side of things but I won't get into it, but people like you and them give me some hope for people. My change in stance on God came through various theories that make a lot of sense to me, but make little sense to most other religious people so I won't discuss them here either but I eagerly await your sequel and agree with much of your authors note. Although truthfully I must ask: you can't believe all, let alone most Christians haven't been hypocritical or on the gay rights issue alone, outright bastards?
| Trade Master chapter 8 . 8/10/2013
I do not know of this Cave Johnson as I don't have much use for youtube outside of music but now I might just find myself trying to find his page, strictly because I've always loved the mad scientist type character.
| Trade Master chapter 4 . 8/10/2013
That authors note feels like I'm talking to my old psychologist again, I never did fully open up but I am no longer as bitter or angry a person although I tended towards suicide rather than attacking others although when provoked I quickly became violent although I brought it towards myself instead of others for reasons I won't discuss in an open forum, but now I have reached a point were I am instead just resigned towards life.
| Trade Master chapter 3 . 8/10/2013
I can honestly agree with what you put in your authors note, I love the quote from one of my favorite books you place at the end of the chapter and having lived in the projects knowing abused children and trying to help them you are completely correct on what I have seen as of yet, although I have never dealt with a magical child so I could be off.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
There's not enough dialogue in the story...I've only read 2 chapters and its getting quite boring. ADD SOME DIALOGUE!