|Reviews for Brutal Harry|
| Gin91 chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
hey, this is truely an amazing story, you gave so much thought into it. thanks very very much for sharing.
| Treant Balewood chapter 13 . 8/6/2013
I like reading this story, Thanks for writing. I'm off to read the sequel now.
| KUMA-Fury19 chapter 13 . 8/4/2013
Let me just say that this tale has to be one of the most beautifully written stories I have ever read on . The character development, the plot, the way you write, EVERYTHING is totally epic (to me :D). Thank you very much for posting it and making it available for everyone to enjoy. I certainly did!
| L.E chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
| biblioholic chapter 13 . 7/28/2013
That was a well written story.
Parts of it were kind of confusing (especially Harry seemingly being prophetic with knowing certain things).
I hope to read more and enjoyed your slightly more realistic version of an abused Harry (the lack of backlash/consequences of Harry's childhood sufferings in cannon always did bother me).
I like how you justified certain things in your story through AN at the end of each chapter and how you had a variety of perspectives through other characters both cannon and self-made.
| biblioholic chapter 5 . 7/28/2013
A little error in consistency: Why did Hermione's Professor of Herpetology state the length of the snake in meters while Harry later states it in terms of feet (and both sets of measurements plus their margins of error differ)?
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 11 . 7/27/2013
Uh... armor is not formal wear. In fact, it would have been incredibly rude for a knight to show up to a ball in armor. Why didn't he just, you know, transfigure armor into formal clothing?
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 9 . 7/27/2013
George Granger continues to be awesome, but Gabrielle took the cake when she made me hnng. Or is it that she took the pie?
| I'MNOTCRAZY1 chapter 8 . 7/27/2013
Wait. Harry was an avid fantasy reader and he didn't ask Auror Vance if she's related to Jack Vance? That's the first thing I'd do.
Also, George Granger? Best. Character. Ever.
| Katara-Hatake chapter 13 . 7/27/2013
Someone finally effin said it. I applaud you.
| invictus-hd chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
This is very original and well written, just not my cup of tea. The first chapter had me hooked, I was so excited to see what you'd do with the story. By chapter three though, Harry comes off as an emotionally dead and frankly sort of boring character, who has WAY past the magical and physical capacity that any 2nd year student should have. The glossing over of events and lack of character development haven't helped. I've rolled my eyes about ten times in the last two chapters, so I won't be continuing. I would like to commend you on a very original and obviously well received story though. Keep up the good work.
| Osmodious chapter 13 . 7/22/2013
Excellent story. The ancillary characters do not receive much development, but that is understandable as we don't really need it. I mean, the protagonist doesn't require more insight into them, so we the readers do not either...so development in terms of Harry's evaluation of them is perfect. The pacing was good, overall storyline VERY good and it was just an enjoyable, if psychologically & emotionally trying, read. Then again, the stories that envelop you the most, that provoke thought and stay with you are the ones that test your intelligence, psyche & emotions. So...thank you for posting it!
| Dare chapter 13 . 7/21/2013
So, in my opinion, it takes a good story to make the reader feel sympathy for the protagonist and an even better on to make them empathise. When a story makes me not only understand the protagonist but actually - for a moment or two - consider making similar decisions to the protagnist, it's a damn good story... like this one.
| wdlwbt chapter 13 . 7/20/2013
This is fantastic. Thank you for sharing :)
Off to read the sequel
| Kira Kyuu chapter 13 . 7/19/2013
This entire story is one of the most epic things I have ever read. Thank you for giving me the chance to read and appreciate it.