Lessthanthree-Carissa chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
Entries not allowed:

Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.

I am sorry to say, that even though this is your first story and by the looks of it you can actually write, that it is in violation of the rules set up by the fanfiction admins. You can however change the OC (reader) parts to a different character in the Naruto-verse. Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have.



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Ttrace chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
This fanfic was cute - I liked it. Good Job! Though I am shocked with myself. I usually do not read anything that wasn't Naru and Sus (romantically involved with each other) - but this fanfic main character was an unknown female - interesting.