Reviews for Lily's Defender |
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![]() ![]() I don't believe in spanking kids but James deserves it |
![]() ![]() ![]() 100 percent agree with the authors hell yeah Severus did |
![]() ![]() Lovely story so far. Pothead and black keep say sec is a dark wizard yet they seem to have the same have muggleborn like the death eaters do. Of corse Dumbledork will take take potheads side. After all he can do no wrong. I didn't expect peter to become friends with sev and lily but I love that you did that make sense he's so called fried did treat him like a loser. I hope Dumbledork doesn't come back. Dear siri keep using spells my Bellatrix whi literally is a death eater yet the idiot keeps calling his brother dark. To me they are worse then the death eaters because at least the death eater aren't hypocrites |
![]() ![]() Why ruin a perfectly good story with an unrealistic dumbledore cancelling all punishments out of nowhere. I was enjoying the story till then. Dumbledore for all his faults, isn't a bigot. Especially to another muggleborn and not when Snape is literally the Prince Godson. Dumbledore is sensitive and calculative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will say a few things here. First, it is insinuated that the marauders rarely got caught, and that is part of why they got away with so much. Next, we are told that they did have plenty of detentions, but likely they were one off, or maybe a weeks worth for something more major. Third, it is hinted that part of Dumbledores partiality was because they were bullying a Slytheren, I'm not sure if he would have overlooked it as easily if they were bullying a muggleborn, or Remus. Also I think there is an argument that Dumbledore will not cancel punishments given unless he thinks they are given falsely (as in the person was wrongly accused), we know there was more than once that Harry got detention and Dumbledore did not get him out of it. Although I admit that may be something that he learned AFTER the marauders time, and also you could argue that he does think they are being unfairly accused. I am really enjoying this story so far. |
![]() ![]() Black Lief and Black Conner? Is there a competition involving how many ways the names can be scrambled? Still...fairly good story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() Yep... definitely the one i read definitely |
![]() ![]() Potty is acting like a bizarre malfoy sr |
![]() ![]() THE GRIMOIRE OMG *Dancing* |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT YES |
![]() ![]() I hate pothead so much...he never deserved lily in canon, i never understood how he went running to him...so in enjoying the bashing lol |
![]() ![]() Definitely the one i read...but i dint rlly pay attention to the tree thing the first time so yea |
![]() ![]() I KNEW IT WAS P I KNEW IT I KNEW IT IM SUPERNATURAL. okay, ummmmmm ignore that plz |
![]() ![]() Ayo...,i think I've read this before lol, I've read so many fanfics that I can't keep track.,...isn't this the one where Dumbles gives that son of a bitch Potter a spanking? Let's wait and see then lol |
![]() ![]() Please don't make this a Dumbledore bash pleasee |