Thank you so much to you and your co-author for a very enjoyable read. I has been an excellent distraction from being sick this last several days. Both of you are excellent storytellers, and I truly appreciate your efforts to complete this story despite all of the troublesome life events you have experienced. I plan to read through the rest of your writings posted here, and expect to enjoy them as much as I have this tale.

I can't continue. Fucking Potter black and pettigrew irritate me too much

It's good to if you can tolerate the 3

Rats! Why is it always rats! (to paraphrase from Indiana Jones). Good for Peter, that was a cool spell.

And is James really a DE or just pretending to be one, or renting a few DEs who have nothing to do that day?

Yeah, kidnapping Lily is really going to make James look good, not, and I suspect Professor Gold could easily mop up the gang.

I'm done. I can't read this anymore.

These guys are SSOOOO obnoxious I can hardly stand to read about them. You are really torturing Lily here.

yess-

i-
it's a competition of who's more spoiled, Charles and Mavis or James...
and I were like this, my parents would have spanked me in front of the entire school, and dragged me home.

you got me so worried over there...
i'm just really happy that Sev remembers his friends!;)

well...there you have it-
the Potter family sure is first at something.*sneer*

oH gOd...

heeeeeey! why didn't Sev buy Regulus a present?

i'm so sorry about your mother! i'm sure she was amazing as you are!

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hmmmm... a yes to the pranks, but i'm not sure which.

Snapegirl,I feel so sorry for your family members! i really hope they get better really soon! i looove this story so far!