Reviews for Time
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Nice job
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I love it! Very poignant and melancholic...
Halibugz chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Aw, how sweet 3
FadingGrin chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Doesn't really play up the "fixation with time" as much as it probably could, but it works fine like this. Good work.:)
T420000 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Aw what a great story. I loved this alot.
Juthindar chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
This was beautiful, and sad, and so, so sweet. Wonderful piece of work. :)
sakura-fai chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Ending was sweet, and doesn't Yukio have a watch he always looks at? XD Yukio's POV was right on dot, with his strong facade but worried, caring self underneath. Loved the fanfic. :)
NIL chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Not bad. I can see the relationship between Rin and Yukio. It didn't drag out and still managed to keep me interested. I do feel that Yukio is a meticulous and organised person so writing him have a time fixation was suitable. Keep writing!
straywords chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
I really liked this. It's so nice to see a sibling story. Yukio's perspective here was done very well. All the characters were well written, actually. Counting down to the exact second does seem like something Yukio would do. Good job :)
AlexandraG chapter 1 . 6/18/2011

It's hard to find a FF about Rin and Yukio with just brotherly love.

I liked it a lot, it's interesting jow you wrote this in Yukio's point of view, and we could see shots from their past, present and future.

Also, I liked the Shiemi-Rin hint too, and Yukio's role in the trio.

Keep writing, take care!
joye chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
T-That was wonderful...;A; I cried at the end.